All Comments on 'Baby Batter Blackmail'

hope this goes for a few more

Mom-son is not my usual thing but your title got my attention, so I read this one. It was well done.

I also riffed off your title for a new thread on Story Ideas forum:

https://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1549477

Hope Alan gets stepmom pregnant. Maybe even more than once.

Nice story......Son should get married to her......Make her a slave for him .......Without the gang bang.......it would be good.....

(4/20/2022) Well, I would have given this story a high score but I'm just not into guys eating guy cum. A kiss, after she swallows, okay, but not the whole cream filling. Definitely not my cuppa tea. Also, thanks for the preview for the next chapter. I know I'm sounding prudish to many on this site, but I'm not into sharing or humiliation. So, I'll skip chapter two thank you. I would have preferred Libby to keep it in-house you might say. No need for Lenny and his crew to intrude, IMO. If she was unattached then cool, full speed ahead, the more the merrier. Sorry, but that’s just me.

What a kinkfest! Part of a story's fascination is watching it unfold. Your afterward just telegraphed the entirety of part two: BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Seriously, why do i even need to read part two now?! gotta say, that truly sucks!

Also: the entire premise of the wife getting pregnant by hook or by crook at the hands of her stepson makes no sense! How can she possibly pass the baby off as her husband's when the stepson is half Korean??? The baby would be one-fourth Korean, right?, so that shoots a hole in your story a mile wide! Once we get to part two, the point is moot, since daddy's about to get cucked by his son and wife in person, leaving no doubt as to the baby's lineage. I probably hould have quit reading when i realized this was a stepson thing and not mom blackmailing her own son, but was given no indication of that in the title or the subtitle. Also, once i figured out the implausability of her gambit i should have quit. As it is, it had lots of great sex, but can't really continue on to part two what with you ruining any chance to be surprised. You gotta figure this shit out a LOT better next time you go down this road. And don't EVER give away nthe entirety of the second half. What a downer. Your three score from me is the lowest i've ever given out, but you deserve it with this impossible plot and its telegraphed ending

and i would have read part two, believe me, but...