All Comments on 'Baby Doll Ch. 01'

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SisterRobin almost 7 years ago

An excellent beginning

I'm quite curious where you are going with this. Your foreshadowing was well done and I'm enjoying the characters; I'll ride along for awhile.

Anonymousalmost 7 years ago

I agree with SisterRobin

Very interesting beginning. Looking forward to where it goes next. Thank you. DJ

KittyKitty82 over 6 years ago

I also have to agree with SisterRobin...

Very enjoyable story so far. Even just as a stand alone story-line. Meaning, once erotica gets put in it I can see it being more than 5 stars. I love your writing style, very smooth. You build your characters well. Very much looking forward to seeing where it goes.

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