All Comments on 'Baby Doll Ch. 04'

There is so much going on here. The plot elements and obvious fetishism spun into a Were story would be enough to catch my interest, but when you add the protagonist's voice, I believe you truly have something exceptional started here.

I'm eager to see where this goes...

So far, 5 stars.

Totally agree with SisterRobin even though I'm so late to the party now.

5* every chapter so far.

Though I do feel Rebecca's reluctance to get involved with Cliff was resolved quite suddenly; better a little early than dragged out ad nauseam.

Some minor typos popping up a little more frequently now but that's nit-picking.

Thanks,

Ducky

I think the fast resolution to her resistance might have something to do eith her past. she obvioudly likes the daddy type, and she likes getting forced to an extent, to when cliff pushed hard enough she let him in and accepted it. The fact that she was abused and for a while at least had learned to accept it might (sadly) also have something to do with it. absolutely fantastic writing though, I adore it. It actually made me feel enough to miss my little girl. hopefully I can be Daddy again for another sweet little. 5 stars all the way