All Comments on 'Baby It's Cold'

by batcrazyluvr

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Avi_DreaderAvi_Dreaderabout 9 years ago
Lovely first story....

Really enjoyed this, a short tale of a girl who knows what she wants. The only thing missing is a description of you/your main character. We, the readers, don't know if you are blond or brunette, black or white, big or small, short or tall...

Look forward to more from you.

tabbymidnitetabbymidniteabout 9 years ago
really enjoyed it

Loved the detail, and truly had a good time reading. Keep these to herself .... Also there better than batteries.... Thank you for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wow! Great story

……It just kept getting better and better! Thanks, I hope you write more!

batcrazyluvrbatcrazyluvrabout 9 years agoAuthor
Advise

Thanks for the advise Avi_Dreader. I appreciate it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
What a lucky girl

Great short

StubbyoneStubbyoneabout 6 years ago
Hotter than hell !!

Holy moly. You have an incredible talent for writing erotic stories ! This one was hot from beginning to end. Your descriptions of who did what to whom was electric. It doesn't matter that the premise wasn't original. What premise is ? I loved it. Please don't stop writing. Your skills are simply amazing! Another favorite and an easy 5.

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