All Comments on 'Baby Misses Daddy'

Although I don’t feel this way about my own father, I do think about it occasionally. I really enjoy when a man calls me his baby girl and has me call him daddy and role playing. :) Great story!

Like your story, but it's way too fast. This 1 page story could easily have been two or three if you had just slowed everything down and put some feeling in it. As I read it, I felt like I was in a race at the Kentucky Derby.

I lost all interest with the 8 inches. It got worse from there with them shouting and yelling. Inane dialogue very lame sex scenes. BARF

1 star

DragonRider55

i loveddd this story! I like shorter stories so I was very please. as for the dragon dude, lighten up! Made me very horny and climaxed 🥰

First, everyone shouted. Second, over use of the word fuck as a description. Third

Slow it down, it's not a race. You have the right idea..but slow it down. The

excitement from writing can get you thinking faster than you can write. Good luck in the future..

I felt like I was reading about two teenagers. Sweet, in some senses, but highly inappropriate for the genre. You could use an editor, too. Other than that, nice job.