All Comments on 'Baby Sitter'

really nice story thouroughly enjoyed it and really nice pic in bio

all i can say is WOW

The story was well written but as a guy I did not care for all the cum talk. I thought it was a bit excessive, especially when it was swapped between all 3 people. Other than that i really liked the pacing of the story. Thank you and keep up the good writing.JL

Quite an imagination you have, Ms. Joan. After reading this entry I can't wait to read your others too, are they as exciting? Unlike the previous commenter, I enjoyed the raunchy frankness of your character. Thanks!

I loved the story. I particularly enjoyed the snowballing. Not many stores exploring this wonderful experience. I also love the mature - young combo. I would love to enjoy my babysitter some time. Keep up the great writing

Very nice, but there could be more. How well does she know Kara's mom? Does Kara's mom know any of the bi friends and would she possibly be interested in some experimentation? There are some possibilities for continuation.

An interesting story, and fantasy. I particularly enjoyed the cum sharing, I wish more men would be eager to do that. I felt that for the most part, I was a fly on the wall, watching listening and smelling the sensations.

My own little quirk was the beginning, the build up. Some how for me it seemed a little bit clinical.

But I enjoyed the read, so well done.

Will move onto another

Miranda

Loved the way the older woman took charge and showed the youngsters how fun sex can be. Also liked the cum aspect.

Well written and very erotic.

...one of my favorite writers here and this one was well written and very erotic.

That Bobby must be superman to cum that much. The action between the ladies was exceptionally sexy. Something about an older woman with a younger one that's a real turn on.

Loved it

Deserves a follow up story to describe Beths new found love of girl-girl sex

Oh I so love this ...oh oh oh...oh