All Comments on 'Baby, You Can Drive My Car'

by hitoriErotica

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Always leave ‘em wanting more

What a wonderful series. One of the most erotic things I’ve ever read, and with such heart. You even painted in realistic character arcs. I loved the end as much as I was sad that it ended. I can’t wait to read what else you conjure up. Well done. Very, very well done.

graymangazergraymangazerover 4 years ago
Hot!

A truly hot series. I do like a good cheating wife/cuckold story and this was one of the better ones. We never actually discovered their names or much about them apart from their unusual sex life. These details are normally paramount to a decent tale, but this was written in such a way that I got to know everything I needed to feel the emotions and thoughts of the characters. She was hot as Hades, no description of her so my imagination was free to roam. He displayed all the conflicting feelings of what I imagine a true cuckold would experience.

There was a bit of a disconnect between each part that spoiled the flow a little and left some questions unanswered ie. what happened to Ray? Where did Arthur come from? yes He did say he wanted her to fuck other men, but it seemed only after She had already decided to when she spoke about what happened at that first party. It also sounded like Michelle played a larger part in how She behaved, but she (Michelle) never quite got enough into the picture overall.

Nate was another loose end. Quite an unbelievable coincidence actually, maybe more believable if he'd seen Her picture beforehand and then set about meeting her. Then we had no explanation of what would become of him: kind of awkward working with someone who has fucked your wife with your help. I understand it's the way the author writes but one can't help asking questions.

The sudden change of mind toward the end could have been better, apart from a hint in the forth or fifth part it didn't really appear She felt that way. And again She claimed that She only did it because he wanted her to but it was pretty obvious she loved every minute.

It may appear that I'm complaining, not really, just pointing out some things that annoyed me. My only complaint is that the author decided to end the story, I believe it could have gone a lot farther and She was a joy to read about.

I'll probably read it again, more than once. Hopefully the author will soon have something more, just as good.

johsunjohsunover 4 years ago

Its a great ending to an amazing series. Every story was compelling, but contained agonizing parts. I'm glad you ended it this way, with the two of them together and the games all over.

I know i'll be reading this series again from time to time. You really know how to stir emotions in your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Change to Incest?

I read your entire series. You’re such a good writer. I would quite enjoy a series by you on the incest category. A moment of weakness between a mother and her son that leads to further dynamics. Perhaps a daughter finding out and seducing dad, that she had a crush on, now feeling freed to pursue, having found out her brother and mom.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

It’s been my experience that every couple who actually have this type of lifestyle are much closer together. Very few of them seem to have the regret and angst that you portray at the end. Most understand that the sex is recrea and that love is eternal. They use it to enhance their time together. It’s ok to have them stop their encounters, but you left me with a bad taste in my mouth.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 month ago

Except for the first chapter, which I have saved as a favorite, neither one was truly comfortable with the relationship. It needed to end like this.

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