All Comments on 'Babydoll Ch. 15'

very good writing however the garage door wont open when the power is off. Just a few spelling problems but overall a very interesting story. Keep writing

Dang, I loved the story!

When does Big Daddy find out about their love?

Maybe, I can fix that in the re-write final edition. I should have manually pulled it up. Thank you for pointing that out. And I appreciate those who have taken time to read this story and the feedback. Also in a previous chapter I mentioned a Beemer. That is this car the Audi -- oops.

Will Big find out? ;)

love the story you are a very good writer. when you leave a house because the power is off ,the button on the garage door also does not work. anyway all good.

I hate Jim and Ashley. They are bad people. 👎👎