by Ashson
I liked the story. I am a stickler for details and at the end she told Jeff he could babysit his nephews. The only issue...it's a neice and nephew. While I have liked most of the stories that I've read of yours, one thing I don't like is the casual way the issue of rape is tossed around. Rape is a serious offense. its not something that should be trivialized or made to sound like it's at a woman's whim as to whether or not a crime has occurred. I know I'm getting a bit heavy here but I really like the erotic stories and could enjoy them so much more if rape was left out. Your stories are great without that.