All Comments on 'BabySitter Asleep'

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barepussloverbarepussloverover 6 years ago
Taken And ?

Not sure of a story line or plot for story!

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 6 years ago
Interesting

I enjoyed the internal dialogue and the N/C action.

The end was a bit forced and incongruent.

But I enjoyed it.

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