All Comments on 'Babysitter Gets Caught and Spanked'

by redlippedsub

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SubmissiveAudreySubmissiveAudreyover 7 years ago
More please...

This was so awesome it was like I was THERE! I am going to check out the rest of your work as I'm sure I wont be disappointed. Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Want

Everything was fine until that last sentence. I'm sure you meant wait. "She couldn't want for Monday." I'm sure she couldn't.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Just right!

So believable. I think your characters (he & she both) were described in a very "female friendly" way--they seemed more like actual humans than in the typical erotic tale. And it was perfectly paced. I think you are very talented. Thank you for the great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sequel!!

I hope you continue this story!! It was amazing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This was so good. I loved it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Very good!

This was so good! I will absolutely check out the rest of your stories. And I agree with another comment, the characters were great and very real. A few typing errors but everyone has those. I hope you continue this, absolutely great. šŸ˜

1sexyminx1sexyminxover 7 years ago
Very hot !

Loved this and really looking forward to reading more and discovering how far Mr Rochester pushes the boundaries of his new slut.

Well done.

kurisutichankurisutichanover 7 years ago
Almost perfect.

It's just unfortunate that it wasn't me. I had to pause 4-5 times to orgasm during my reading.

rmac1rmac1about 7 years ago
fucking hot

I love to spank and then fuck, it's a wonderful feeling and site looking at an ass freshly spanked and fucking right afterwards.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hi

Hey there just wanted to say that this story is freaking HOT. I am an author also, but my stories are nothing compared to this on.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
This was fucking HOT.!!

I would LOVE a second chapter. This is the kind of employer every girl needs. It's all realistic, I hate when people write and then the mans like "yep I fucked ya, k bye" like in a real setting he would be a tiny ashamed because she's his babysitter for a crying out loud it's a "forbidden" kinda thing but this was pretty realitic and made me soaking wet. He seems like a great "teacher" for her. Please make another chapter!! I'd love to see what happens on monday

rmac1rmac1about 5 years ago
So hot....

I can only imagine, that that babysitter was so sexually aroused that Monday could not come soon enough for her liking. I think she and Mr. Rochester will be exploring each other quite a bit more sexually. If I was Mr. Rochester, Iā€™d begin planning for Monday immediately!

LordDeanLordDeanover 2 years ago

I love forced sex that turns pleasurable for both parties. I could imagine taking her like you wrote. It made me hard imagining that. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fantastic. Very very erotic.

Totally LOVED it.

Very imaginatively conceived, and masterfully crafted.

Rachel is a keeper.

I gave you a 5.0 = 100% = A+ (ā˜†ā˜†ā˜†ā˜†ā˜†)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yes, the plot was "very imaginatively conceived" indeed.

Also, the whole story was very well structured.

Obviously Rachel has already had the hots for Mr Rochester, and after he had his way with her she realizes she wants Mr Rochester to introduce her to kinky sex.

This is a FIVE STAR STORY.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Excellent: ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜…ā˜… (5.0)!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

šŸ‘šŸ‘!

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

He should have taped her mouth and fucked her ass.

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