by redlippedsub
This was so awesome it was like I was THERE! I am going to check out the rest of your work as I'm sure I wont be disappointed. Great story!
Everything was fine until that last sentence. I'm sure you meant wait. "She couldn't want for Monday." I'm sure she couldn't.
So believable. I think your characters (he & she both) were described in a very "female friendly" way--they seemed more like actual humans than in the typical erotic tale. And it was perfectly paced. I think you are very talented. Thank you for the great read.
This was so good! I will absolutely check out the rest of your stories. And I agree with another comment, the characters were great and very real. A few typing errors but everyone has those. I hope you continue this, absolutely great. š
Loved this and really looking forward to reading more and discovering how far Mr Rochester pushes the boundaries of his new slut.
Well done.
It's just unfortunate that it wasn't me. I had to pause 4-5 times to orgasm during my reading.
I love to spank and then fuck, it's a wonderful feeling and site looking at an ass freshly spanked and fucking right afterwards.
Hey there just wanted to say that this story is freaking HOT. I am an author also, but my stories are nothing compared to this on.
I would LOVE a second chapter. This is the kind of employer every girl needs. It's all realistic, I hate when people write and then the mans like "yep I fucked ya, k bye" like in a real setting he would be a tiny ashamed because she's his babysitter for a crying out loud it's a "forbidden" kinda thing but this was pretty realitic and made me soaking wet. He seems like a great "teacher" for her. Please make another chapter!! I'd love to see what happens on monday
I can only imagine, that that babysitter was so sexually aroused that Monday could not come soon enough for her liking. I think she and Mr. Rochester will be exploring each other quite a bit more sexually. If I was Mr. Rochester, Iād begin planning for Monday immediately!
I love forced sex that turns pleasurable for both parties. I could imagine taking her like you wrote. It made me hard imagining that. Thank you.
Fantastic. Very very erotic.
Totally LOVED it.
Very imaginatively conceived, and masterfully crafted.
Rachel is a keeper.
I gave you a 5.0 = 100% = A+ (āāāāā)!
Yes, the plot was "very imaginatively conceived" indeed.
Also, the whole story was very well structured.
Obviously Rachel has already had the hots for Mr Rochester, and after he had his way with her she realizes she wants Mr Rochester to introduce her to kinky sex.
This is a FIVE STAR STORY.