All Comments on 'BabySitter Tricked'

this was a nice start, i hope you decide to continue this...

You write reluctance so well

Bland and boring as always but now you’re not even trying to set up an interesting story.

Maybe try mashing the keyboard and see if that is any better.

You need to take more time writing and stop just pounding them out.

I liked this. Its was a tiny rushed but bit bad at all. Continue?

If they don't like what you write let them write their own you're all I read in this site. I Agree some of your stories don't get to me but you don't have to cater to us

Write what you want to do and forget everything else. I love your stories most of them at least.

Turned me on!

I liked the premise. I love the fact that there are no typos!!