by Norweger
Very hot story. Love babysitter stories. Seventeen is perfectly old enough to enjoy sex. Even legal in 39 states and D.C. (16 years of age in 32 states). Thanks for the read.
Your writing skills in English are far better than the many of the native speakers who post here.
Yes, many of the hyphens should have been commas. Dialogue should be indicated by a “ not ‘. And always start a new paragraph when dialogue shifts.
Very good story with only one caveat. "So let it be written, so let it be done!" was said by Ramses (Yul Brenner) in "The Ten Commandments."
There is a series in this where all her friends also want to have their first time with him....Nice story