by VirginDiaries
Well done with great feelings. It's nice to find new friends isn't it?
Yeah but TASTY. Found no evidence of editing errors. Try for a longer story or even a series. 5🌟's
very nice, but as already stated, it was to short, the buildup was nice and it ended when things got real hot for this reader. well done
Kinda stupid, somebody 'forgetting' something like that? and then you threw in chocolate skin and made it worse. Just lousy.