All Comments on 'Babysitting for Daddy'

Mmmmmm that was great

More please that was awesome....what happens next??!!!

I'm not that so good with grammar checking but, please, do place commas in your sentences.

Like (checking it out for you):

- "Oh no, baby."

NOT "Oh no baby."

- "Girls, guess who's here!"

NOT "Girls guess who's here!" The latter has different meaning but we know what you mean.

That was the best story i have read on her EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work ,you really should consider making this into a series you would do great. This made me so horny hot and wet for my Master thanks for the experience

please keep writing this god I'm so wet now

Thank you all for your comments! As I said, I haven't been able to find an editor. Any advice you have is appreciated. I didn't plan to keep this going, but if I can, I'll truly consider a part 2. Please look out for more stories from me! I've got a few more on the way.

Hello! If you're interested in getting an editor, I can leave my email so that you can contact me :)

.". you are .." is 'you're' NOT 'your'!

As in, for instance -

“And your very welcome …” - “And you're very welcome …”

"Your a sweetheart Violet!" - "You're a sweetheart Violet!"

"That pussy is mine. Your my baby." - "That pussy is mine. You're my baby."

as you can see you have several fans so please i beg you on behalf of myself and all your fans to keep this going. you are a great writer this is now my favorite story on this site great job keep the stories coming. yours truly a devoted fan

I really hope you keep writing this storyline, it's so fuckin hot.

Excellent story. Please keep writing more. I thoroughly enjoyed it and can't wait for more.

Please continue this story.

Thoroughly enjoyed. For not having an editor, you did an excellent job. Only some minor grammar errors.

Hey, loved it. 5 stars.

Violet should accept her new role as daddy's sex slave, and enjoy being a baby making factory. Violet should give birth to a new baby every 10 months. Daddy's wife should ask Violet to live with them as Daddy's 2nd wife.

Great read but please stop using "your" instead of "you're". It is one of the most distracting errors.

Please post more "Daddy" stuff. So hot!

To something with wonderful potential. I hope this wasn't a one time fling. Lol. I love a pregnant fuck slut and nonconsential is the best. Good luck in the future, I'll add you to my favs so i can keep a eye out for more. Kisses

More please :)

This was so good!

Good story! I like the setup to more - especially the tension happening in your lead character. I get the impression she's starting to think about becoming daddy's girl. And warming to that idea.

This story is so hot, I love it. I hope you are planning to keep on writing :)

The only weakness of this piece is the dialogue. It sounds written, not spoken. Try reading it aloud to get a feel for the flow of normal speech. Everything else was great! I really hope you continue with this one or others. Great job.

I love when old man filled young girl.

Excellent storyline I really like your thought process you are on your way to some really good writing. just slowdown a little and let it flow.

I enjoyed this a lot, I really hope.you make this a series.

pleasee updated more the story line its a great story

your story has brought back memories of sweet babysitter beth.remembering her handjobs and blowjobs has made my 8 "member swell to its full proportions .I masterbate to your story

Where does this man live? If he wants a sex slave I'm available!!!!!!! Damn this is an extremely hot story, please continue it!!!

So fucking hot, made me cum twice X

Wish I Knew Mr.Bill 😻😻

your = belongs to = your car

you're = contraction of you and are = you're illiterate