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LucasonoffLucasonoffover 3 years ago
Nice

Can't wait for version two. This was erotic. If you need more idea write to me at

Litewriter@outlook.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Watch your tense

Most of this is in the past tense, but the last three paragraphs are mostly in the present tense.

ojanziojanziover 3 years ago
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The way you are moving from past tense to present tense all the time makes it very difficult to understand, the English language is hard like that!!

HornyForIncestHornyForIncestover 3 years agoAuthor

I’m sorry that I jump from past tense to present tense in this story. I wrote this when I was 17. I thought I had changed the tenses before I posted it, but I guess not.

Eros_343Eros_343over 3 years ago
Good shit

Fuck this was hot. Just long enough to be interesting too.

MilfInTheCity719MilfInTheCity719about 3 years ago

I've read 1&2!!!! Eagerly awaiting part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

good story

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I’m a 23 year old female in Oregon. I’ve been writing erotica since I was 17 in the form of fan-fictions and really enjoy writing to this day! Most of my stories are just reposted from my account on sexstories.com

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