All Comments on 'Bacchus'

Thank you for nudging me to read this one-off of yours! I love science fiction and didn't realize that Bacchus was one pf your best. I would've gotten around to it eventually, as your 'lesser' tales are still awesome, but I am certainly glad that you steered me straight on the sweet story. My only complaint is that this seemed like the Readers Digest ( edited for brevity) version that really could have been much longer, and you know you could have made this into another long running saga (like you need another one) very easily. And too bad you had to destroy the Earth (Ka-blooey!), Mother Earth deserved a good fumigation at the very least though! TTFN

I loved this story and the characters. So well written, keep up the most excellent work!

I loved this storey, I don’t normally read this genre as it’s not my thing. This storey is so well constructed, I could not stop reading sat up until 2am last night as it was so enthralling.

I love all your stories, in my option you are one of the very best literotica writers, the Shepard series is my favourite, I really wish you would continue the series.

Thanks for all the enjoyment.

Another great story! I share the same thoughts with “Anonymous” below... well, really also with many others. Your stories are fantastic reads. I also lost sleep. Thank-you again for your talent. On to the Shepard series now.

I have no idea why I waited so long to read this one, A wonderful story but I was so bummed out when Angelina just left and blamed him. I love you plots and the way you tale a story.

An interesting story, but ultimately a bit sad and depressing by the end.

This is the worst story ever.

interesting story, but sort of a funky ending

I think author has a thing for being cuckolded. Seems a theme in his stories. This story was terrible.

Impossibly complicated, convoluted, confusing story. I read it till the end just to see how ridiculous it could be. Ten separate theories would have nice. This is utter mess. 1 star.

A bit unothodox, maybe, a certain twist to the end, without a doubt, but remember this is fiction and "anything" can happen in a ficticious world! The story was fun to read, the characters were different but added to and helped bind the whole thing together. I agree that the way things ended with Angelina was sad, but in the end the way you described it was perfect, she wanted kids and couldn't have them with Bron so she left to find another way of being happy. Overall another good story from a great writer who never fails to entertain. And isn't that the goal of each of these efforts? :-)

Great story! Any life is composed of unexpected twists and perhaps unwelcome turns...Bron could be any of us. At times we can decide our path, but then sometimes events occur that take decisions away from us. Happiness has never been a guarantee. That's just life!

The ending...appropos . Not everybody could end up with what they desired of Bron, and Angelina had to decide what she wanted most, and she chose.

All in all, a well told yarn with a realistic denoument.

There are no 'happily ever after' endings in life...it's just what you can learn to live with. Five stars.

Isn't it interesting that most of the negative comments on stories come from 'Anonymous '...people who have not even bothered to create a digital presence. So sad that they are so angry and yet so scared.

I really enioyed this story, I'm slowly making my way through your work. Such a rollercoaster of emotions!

I've read the three stories from the author recently. All of them use rape and/or rescue from rape as a plot device to quickly ingratiate the protagonist with the heroine. It seems like the author uses it a crutch. It got old real fast. I only got 1/3 way through the story before I lost interest in the one dimensional characters especially the villains. I put this put up because I really do think that the author has talent, however i feel that they were a bit lazy in framing this story.

I visit your Lit page every day to check for updates and browse stories from you that I have yet to read. I came across this one this morning and must admit I was initially skeptical. 'Non Human' is a category I've never been a fan of but thought... why not.

I'm VERY glad I took the gamble. I love this story. Thank you for the care and dedication you put into crafting your tales. Your characters are immense, and the story lines are mind blowing. I stand humbled by your talent.

I'm sorry, but for me this story lost its magic in the last few pages.

At the beginning there are great speeches about personal responsibility, and when the end of the story comes, few finally take it up, starting with Angelina.

I don't use the excuse that she needs that lie to heal, she behaved like a real coward and she has to assume the consequences of her actions.

Laura seems to have shown up solely to speed up some processes, and then outgrow her usefulness after the time of the bomb, as even though Bron saved her life, she goads him into having sex with two strangers, proving that she really hasn't. changed at all, and then doesn't even have the decency to apologize.

Also, I'm not even going to talk about Bron's constant amnesias. I mean, the first time might have been fine as a twist, but repeating the exact same situation a few pages later doesn't make any sense to me.

I think Bron should have stayed dead, that would have forced Angelina and Laura to take responsibility, to realize that they would never really see him again.

I wonder if Angelina would have been able to stick to her stupid "You left me" speech knowing that he did leave her for good now, and knowing that the last time she saw him in his cell, she made him bear the lie of her and take the pain she deserved, despite everything Bron did for her.

I don't know why, well I do but.. I hate Angelina.

I just hate her choice, I hate how it was made and I hate how it was shown to me.

Why? Just why?

I like everything about this but how it ended with her, he clearly loved her and she loved him but noooo, fuck me.

Sigh.

This a good read, but I hate how Bron couldn't have kids and that's what broke him and Angelina apart. Probably my worst fear personally.

God damn it, I will always remember this story, but I don't think a good book should be remembered for how much it angered me.

It seams that no matter what the topic is, you excel at it, I definitely see some parallel’s to Ben from your sheppard stories and Ed from walk a mile and those connected stories, I guess you stick what’s works, but that is a good thing, at least I think it is.

WOW, truly a beautiful story! I almost didn't read it, not my favorite genre. 5 BIG FAT BLAZING SHOOTING STARS!

It hurts!

Okay, many many things to say, starting with, I wish Angelina a lifetime of misery with that dick she married, Bron deserved so much more than that spoiled brat could offer. I didn't like the way the story went with Angelina, but it was realistic, how many people end up with their first loves, really?

Now, onto the comments, to the person who said the author uses (Im paraphrasing) rape themes as a crutch? Have you not seen the stats? 97% of women have experienced sexual harassment, assault or rape. The author isn't using anything but the sorry state our world is in. And before someone comes at me, oh so brave posting anonymously, I don't have an account, I just never bothered, sorry, not sorry. But is it any braver to post under a username that has no links to your identity? In other words, fuck off, and go write your own story, as someone who did just that, it's fucking hard, and having people shit all over your efforts is beyond demoralising, so, as all you rotten little trolls seem not to have learned the lessons the rest of us learned as infants, all me to educate you. If you don't have anything nice to say, shut the fuck up and mind your own business.

Anon (below) is absolutely right. Just enjoy what you liked about the story....and if you didn't enjoy it, why did you read 27 web pages of it? And if you skipped ahead to comment instead of reading, then your opinion is worthless. Just go away and read some smut you like.

BurntRedStone: another amazing set of characters who we care about after only a few pages. Really impressive!

“He'd just have to keep living like every day was his last so he could truly appreciate them.”, and that’s what summarises best this wonderful story full of different and intense characters.

On a whole other planet but still has the Irish.

Hello hateful people. It’s not your right to attack someone for negative opinions. The author can address these issues but other readers should keep it about the story. Besides if you really believe that every word should be rainbows and sunshine then you will never be more than you are. We need the negative words to fuel and drive us toward greater things. You can get love from ya mom

As another reader said, our first love is seldom the one we end up with. Hell, I didn't meet my life's love until I was 42. I was disappointed that Angelina moved on but life is like that sometimes. Your choosing Bailley to settle with was ultimately more fulfilling and satisfying. You seem to like having a gang 'supporting' your protagonist in some of your stories, which is highly entertaining in its own right. Hard to remain humble, eh? Chuckle... Well done, Maestro!

Excellent! A moving story that resonates. So many nuances that are instructional and relevant, like "the safe word is stop". It's the only word a sub may be able to remember. It at least gives them a chance if overwhelmed. That said, there is no justification for causing pain, even if someone wants it. That use of power will reinforce damage and corruption. It is not a safe outlet. Be truly honest if you want to care. Great story otherwise. You really are an outstanding writer!

Epic story!

Great story until you decided to finish it with cuckolding. 1/5 stars.

Another great story..Was sort of annoyed at the Angelina betrayal and the bailey filll in needed a bit more backstory. still a.great story verse.More

I just finished rereading this book and I love it all over again. I know some say that Bron should have ended up with Angelina but I think this was a much better ending.

1. One thing I wondered about was if being a genie required him to be sterile or if his body just had not matured enough to make him fertile? Could that have been changed in his creation?

2. Another thing that I thought curious was how every woman would react to being kissed by him. Could his chemistry have a natural aphrodisiac effect on the human body?

3. I would love to see you write a follow up to this story. You have left a few breadcrumbs that might be explored. Brown’s healing process for one. —The power vacuum now that earth is essentially destroyed. Racism and misogyny continue to exist in this world and there’s the possibility that back stories of Bron’s group of female friends might prove interesting. Perhaps starting with a plot line of Asami, who now is the sole survivor of her clan, being presented with the off earth remains of the family empire. Sasha and Kie would be extremely valuable in this regard. —Or something happens to Angelina as a way to get at her father could spark a new story. Bron may not be IN LOVE with her now, but he’s not going to let a request for help go unanswered. —Perhaps there’s other scientists out there who have been trying to figure out how he was created and use legal and not so legal means to acquire his genetic material and medical information.

4. Regardless, this was a hell of a story and I thank you for sharing it

Excellent story!

A have only one minor bit of constructive criticism - a masseuse is female; the masculine form of the word is masseur.

I also agree with other commenters that the breakup with Angelina didn't feel authentic to the story, like maybe that plot element was added later as an afterthought.

Good story but a gilded cage is still a cage! LM

I'm not into harem stories but that doesn't mean I disliked this story. There were some very emotional parts to the story early on that made it worth while to read. Maybe I just hang out with the wrong crowd, but most of the women I know don't want to share their man with other women, even if he's the jolly blue giant with the enormous dong.

The first I've read from you. Bravo! Really enjoyed the twists and turns. The Angelina thing threw me off. Just wow. Bron ended up with the best

Blade Runner Anyone? anyone?

Can’t think of a better story on literotica. A few ties but this was just refreshing.

This is one of my favorite stories of all time. I felt every emotion, every feeling on the scale. What a beautiful story! You Mr. RedStone are a fucking genius! There isn't any other Author here that comes to even a close second compared to you Sir. You have made this genre now my favorite. Some of your stories I'm reading for the third time because I can't get enough of your stories. Thank you very much, you're the best! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

You Bastard. You tore my heart out and kicked it around. I guess it's the true sign of a superlative author, because they manipulate your emotions. Really nice end run with the whole Angelina and her Dad Petyr. I honestly thought he was a manipulative badguy. You got me good! 5* a Heartbreaker

What a ride...

This was a great story, but I think it deserves a follow up story as it has some loose ends that needs to be addressed in a new story or an epilogue.

Talk about a rollercoaster of emotions, wonderful story , wonderful writing. A million thanks for sharing.

That really was great.

Don’t know how to express myself, as im overwhelmed and taken by heart ….. you’re the genius writing tales which taken my breath away, how can i find words as im not even nearly skilled as you, to honor this to express my feelings to show my speechlessness as im recall the tale i had been reading ….. Genius with a magic pencil ….. this is so fantastic so marvelous as you taking me into another dimension

Thank you for sharing this extraordinary piece ….. ten spaceships 🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀🚀 and ten hearts 💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝💝 and ten stars ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨

Whoa! Up, down and sideways. Great story, awesome ending! 👍

Nice story the whole angelina ending is what kept this story feombeing a 9 out to 10 dropping it to a 7 out of 10. Angelina is a total bitch, completely useless to the story honestly, she left him after everything? Bullshit, hope she dies, also there was no real conclusion, there still much more left to discuss unless theres another part to the story but otherwise not the most resolute ending, regardless it was an okay story, hate the whole angelina thing and it kinda of makes me regret ever reading this but whatever thank you.

Um…. I’ve loved everything of yours so far… but…

Man…Angelina… in the beginning she was self centered brat. After the thwarted rape attempt she grew and matured and became thoughtful and self sacrificing. Then what? Relapse? She can’t even break up properly? Can’t muster the courage to tell him that she wants something different in her life? Just ghosts him? Then wants him to sacrifice for her again so she can feel ok about betraying him like a piece of shit that she is? You can love someone, but when they intentionally hurt you repeatedly, there has to be a point when you cut them out of your life completely.

…sigh…

It was an excellent story, as usual. I kinda had the feeling about Angelina about mid way through the story, that something was going to happen that would split them apart. I was hoping, until he heard the news that she and the other guy were married and expecting, that I was wrong, for some kind of reconciliation. I hate being right. I wouldn't expect them to be seeing much of each other ever again. Their last meeting was pretty succinct, I would say: she couldn't face him and accept the responsibility for her choices, and he didn't hate her enough to force her to. Deep down, he will always love her, to some degree or another, and she will always be plagued by that ever so annoying question: "What if...." For some reason, the opening line to "Whiskey Lullabye" comes to mind as I think of this. I am glad that he found a truer love in Bailey, and with Sasha/Alena, and Asami, and shares a loving connection with all of Angelina's former friends (They all seemed to be pissed at her for how she handled the situation with Bron). Also glad that he didn't take out any negativity he had towards her on her father. Overall, a good story.

Excellent story again. Personally, I think Angelina should have to live with knowing she actually left him, without him having to"give her an out" from it. He went in to save THEIR friend after all

I hate Angelina’s response, but I understand her behaviour. I think the months Bron was in the coma was more than she could bear, and her actions were instinctual preservation. I think she needed to be separate from the anguish, and using him as a scapegoat was the safest way. - Honestly, I think her love was not love, but a collection of conflicting emotions that grew out of her need to feel safe after her trauma. That which feels like love is often not. Bron saw her need and chose to ease her pain. - Truly, an agonizing set of circumstances. The good that came out of everything needs to be appreciated.

A truly wonderful story.

What a 'rags to riches' story as a metaphor to love and fulfillment. Shocked that Angelina lost faith and followed her different path. (But not really as my own marraige and desire for family disintegrated, as my wife and her mother blamed me totally.)