All Comments on 'Bachelor Party Gang Bang'

I love the moronic evaluation of a crap story by using the lame excuse that it’s just fiction DUH reply if ever there was one. You are amazed so many people were upset with this trash story. Did you ever consider that maybe, just maybe, you are the moron and not everyone else. Oh and I know you are not able to wrap your mind around very much so don’t fret. Did you know that fiction especially very well written fiction, actually does affect people. Your mind numbing logic is, It’s five stars cuz it’s shit but not real? Do you read a book? Haha. I’m sorry I know you don’t read books. If you read a book, watch a movie, or listen to music, etc. Anyway, if you read a 500 page novel and it was chock full of pus and totally rancid, your reply is to throw the media out the window and say, it’s not real! Don’t let that awful story bother you. I know you are grappling with your limited vocabulary but it’s ok. Nobody cares or is upset with you, it’s your translation of a fictional story having no weight because it’s fiction. Damn man! The more I think about it, how can you even for a second, think that fictional stories shouldn’t affect people because it’s fictional. That just might be the tiniest brain to ever attempt applying logic to anything. Nice job Forest Gump

Amazingly awful. The characters are one dimensional and poorly written. Let me see…A happy marriage and your wife wanting to be the stripper at the bachelor party? I don’t give a shit what she wants. She is not getting in to that party. She also becomes an ass fucked whore about five minutes after arriving. I bounce her ass to the curb as quickly as possible. The other issue is her going zero to slut in 6 seconds. If my wife wanted to be a revenue generating whore, then by all means go get a job in a club. If you want to be a whore then at least make a few dollars doing it. She can’t ever be trusted again and she needs to realize guys talk to their wives and friends so what she did in excruciating detail needs to get around. I’d make certain it did. When you take a bunch of guys and have unprotected sex with all of them, including ass fucking, it’s time to accept that you made a poor choice of a spouse. It does happen. Hopefully she didn’t contract HIV. Obviously you would be a fool to believe she hasn’t always been fucking around. Hubby needs to get tested for any STD. The biggest reason this whole shit show goes sideways is because any of the guys who participated risk the lives of anyone she has been with. You will end up divorced too but at least you do the right thing to make sure innocent people don’t end up sick or even dead. A cheating whore wife who makes terrible decisions and treats marriage as a joke. Why not stay single? The wife will become a pariah and rightly so. Can you imagine the rage among the wives who had husbands who banged this white trash? The husbands deserve blame for taking part but all of those wives will say, my husband deserves part of the blame but the wives will say, I know my husband was wrong in his actions but that skank, who helped to ruin all of our lives gets beat up big time because if little miss misunderstood had an ounce of self respect she would say to all concerned, all of the people who got dragged into this no matter if it’s pending divorce for you along with other men and women, ruined reputations, possible lawsuits and last but not least, damaging your kids if you have any. She could set things relatively right by drafting up a very detailed letter to all concerned explaining you know you’ve caused much pain in the world. Your gift to all of them would be the letter and then hearing that you put one from a 38 caliber in that vapid and feeble mind of yours. The ex wife to be really has to feel the weight of her actions and then suffer great pain just like the pain you so cavalierly inflicted on others.

Amazing story thankyou. 5 stars. I'm amazed by the number of people who cant get their tiny minds around the fact that this is FICTION. DUH.

Did not really like it. But good story from the women's point of view. Gary was too embarrassed. What happed to Tom?

Thanks for your writing.

10 Big Blazing Stars for a Super Hot Hot Hot Story. It cracks me up How many commenters on this site and this story are all pissed at this Hot Slut wife. Just so you guys know, The Best fucks are ALWAYS the Slut, because SLUTS love sex and want as much sex as they can get, and because "practice makes perfect" Sluts get the most practice cuz they always want to fuck and do fuck often. The trouble the "Fragile Male Ego" that guys have that wants to divorce their Hot Wife for getting a little Strange. Sluts will always be getting Strange. The Trick is finding a slut that really loves you and even tho she will ALWAYS fuck around, but if she really loves you she will come back home to you in a timely manner. Not Sunday or next week from a Friday Night Date, but Friday Night. Of course, it is easier said than done. I've never been able to let my wife or old lady go out on a date. LOL But I've shared all my women and I love sloppy seconds. LOL Thanks for the Effort on this story. Buster2U

I wanted to share my ex wife but she said no. This was such a turn on.

Just hope it's all true...? Would love that to happen to me and my wife....!!! Such a sexually willing wife is a fantasy waiting to happen for a lot of husbands, I'm certain.

I liked the story very much but I think someone should have turned off the porn. A real woman is always better than porn.

I love your stories - thank you so much for your good work. I love the way you take your time to build the tension. I love the cuckolding, the humiliation, the comparison between the better fuck/cock and the husband's lesser one. I hope those are real stories (at least some of them). I had some real stories like this in my life. I miss them all...

So....last commenter... WHY ARE YOU READING THIS SITE ??????

I don’t know any guys who wouldn’t dump the bitch. Fucking whore. Have her served with the divorce papers at her place of employment. She belittles me with a stranger telling him his cock is better? You’re gone bitch. I’d pack a bag that same night and leave after she goes to bed. No way I’d never touch her again or trust her for any reason. If she can do what she did, why would you think she wouldn’t fuck around on you?

Wow, the haters are out in full force. It begs the question, "why are you reading this site?" Personally, I think it could be possible given the right circumstances. As a guy, I'd freaking LOVE IT if my woman had a tale like this from her past. The losers who write hateful comments should just not read it.

Another loser husband married to a first class whore. So original

Better ending... Once they were done with her she looked around for Gary to help her home, but he was nowhere to be found. A couple of the guys, including big cock, decided they'd keep the whore for the night. They told her back to big cock's room and both of them fucked her several times during the night. The next morning two other groomsmen came by and had their turn with the cheating skank slut who never once resisted. They finally kicked her out with only about half her clothes and not even a tip. "She wasn't that good" commented big cock as she stumbled out the door. When she finally got home Gary was gone. There was a note with his wedding ring on it. "Never realized I'd married a piece of trash whore. Hope you had a good time and can figure out how to make ends meet without me. You'll never see me again and if you do run... or you'll get the bitch slapping of your life. She ended up Turing tricks to make a living since she had no real skills. She was heart broken but nobody gave a shit.

Is Gary an idiot or a wimp? I think both. Who wants to have a GF who turns into a whore? Time to get rid of her. And the whore will surely realize that she will never be marriage material!

Another slut wife who only does the gig cuz she convinces her husband nothing will happen. Then she goes from zero to whore in minutes. I’m sorry but if I’m the husband I know that I shouldn’t have to stop her. You always hear this especially from women. Well why didn’t you stop me or say something? Why not? Cuz we’re married and normally a marriage doesn’t include stripping and fucking strange men. I shouldn’t have to tell you what to do or not do. You are responsible for your behavior. Fittingly I’m outta here and I’m moving to a hotel tonight. I don’t sleep with whores. We’re done bitch. You’ll hear from the divorce attorney. Oh and please please beg me to take you back so I can leave you twisting in the wind long enough for you to get served when you aren’t expecting it. Love it! Perfect!

Thanks for a really HOT, erotic read! It really turned me on!!

Ever women should enjoy at least one night like that in her life. Well written and hot 5*

In response to the comment 15 before this one: yes, the incognito stripper at my bachelor party actually was my bride the next day, so everyone there got to see my bride naked. And yes, she had previously fucked most of the guys there, some at parties and some privately. She kept up with a select few of the private ones right up until our wedding, but nobody but me fucked her the night before. But three of them fucked her the morning of the wedding (something about a long-held 'tradition' in the Old Country, 3 being for good luck), so I guess that fulfills your fantasy of her saying her vows with cum running down her legs. (That was her fantasy too.) You wanted to know how she behaved at the wedding. Like many brides, she was beautiful and radiant in her gossamer white gown. She wore no stockings, and by looking closely, yes I did see fresh cum between her thighs. Most people probably thought they were seeing sweat as it was a very hot day. You asked how I felt knowing they'd all seen my bride naked the previous night. It made the ceremony that much more exciting for me, knowing that the men had just seen her nude but didn't know it was her. It also made me proud that of the many men present who had fucked this desirable woman, she had chosen me. She continues to be the secret stripper at friends' parties, and by now, years later, probably everyone knows.

And to clarify the last sentence in my earlier comment, she didn't fuck anyone at my bachelor party but needed lots of condoms for previous parties where she'd been the anonymous stripper.

Nothing like a woman who's out of control and wants it so bad she'll do anything. Great story!

I really enjoyed this one!

We need to know what happened at the poker game!

Wow still sweating!

Loved it. I have never watched my wife being gang banged but would love to.

We have had many mfms and I like to jack off while he slides his cock into her wet pussy.

Love it when a man comes on her tits and face and nothing better than a cream pie

She is a real hottie and loves to go braless and panties when at bars and has had many

"accidental" down blouses and upskirts.

I'd beat her to death with a baseball bat, first blow would be to her face.

I wish I had the chance to do something like that. it got me hot, just wanting to do it for real %*

Like it has anyone had their mom aunt or sister do bachelor partytook my sister to one saw are mom at bachelor party geting double penetrated she was screaming they doing double vag two big black cocks stretching hair cunt she yelled don't cum in i don't carry black kid in me I yelled knock her up every body said both unloaded sametime she yelled you bastards then my sister walked up to her called her whore and slut said your one yelled knock her up then my sister started stripping clothes off said all black guys here in room are only ones to fuck me yelled out load she was ovalating she want the two largest thicks to double vag me stretch and rip me apart barry real deep in me both pump your sperm in me knock me up like my mom one one got in her 2nd one push up in her cunt she yelled and screamed then yelled fuck me hard as you can she yelled to me and are momsaid out loud hope I have twins pop out of me 9 months later mom and sister both delivered twins my told me after her delivery told me once ok to fuck she wanted to do all creampie gangbang all black guys ahe even told are mom your doing it too from now said mother and daughter

For some reason I do not like fantasies were the fianc'ee becomes the "center of attention" at a bachelor party. The only fantasy of this type I have liked is "Accidental Gangbang". I have to add this; as security at a bachelorette party both the fianc'ee and her maid of honor were gangbanged by the four male strippers. On the group leaving I notice that the maid of honor was wearing a wedding ring. Need I say more, any thing can happen. I think that is why I read this stuff.

Very much appreciated and I agree Once a woman becomes a slut is always a slut. I'm a slut and my experience is similar to this story. Went to a mistress night at an adult event. Was gangbanged by 47 men. Every hole was very well serviced. Even had double vaginal penetration on that night as hubby watched. He says it was great to see his beautiful lady become a whore . I do love my husband but I ask him to take me out for gb at least once a month. A slut is always a slut,that me

Fantastic! Great build up. Bringing out her competitive nature. Then her undeniable true slut and whore self. Great job!!

Salope et pauvre cocu

Marry that girl

it happened to me...last spring we went to Jamaica , we where invited to a local party ,,it was so sexy for me watching all the local men and women flirting and drinking..i got drunk,,soon one of the man took me to the bedroom and start fucking me..i enjoyed it a lot feeling his big dick in my pussy,,,was surprised when his wife got in and got her hairy cunt in my mouth sliding to get her ass over my face,,,in no time he cum in my pussy and his wife cum in my mouth ,,they left the room i was going up when 2 other local get in and start fucking my mouth and my pussy,,they cum soon..i looked around and there was more than 5 men took there turned fucking my cum filled pussy,,it was a hell of night

To 'Anonymous', immediately above: if I read your comment carefully, you're saying that the stripper at your bachelor party was actually the Bride? And that she had previously fucked most of the guys there? How did she behave the next day at the wedding? And how about you, knowing that most of the men at your wedding had seen your new wife strip off just a few hours earlier? At least she didn't fuck them again the night before, or she would have been standing at the altar saying her vows with their cum running down her legs. That would be so hot! Somebody should right that story!

Great story. At first I thought, why not have her just turn off the TV? But then I soon realised that the porn on the TV was a device to urge the stripper on, to up her game. Brilliant! I really liked how 'Candy' escalated her level of eroticism. Don't worry about the negative comments. They just can't accept that some women really enjoy being watched while they're fucking, and who are capable of deciding for themselves just how far to go.

My own wife was the secret stripper at my bachelor party. With a wig and a foreign "accent" she was able to pull it off without getting outed. She allowed looking and touching, but no penetration. Most of them had already fucked her at friends' bachelor parties when she was still my girlfriend, and she really didn't need to fuck them again the night before her own wedding, even if they wouldn't know who they were fucking. This was many years ago.

As for pregnancy, back then she'd just had a hysterectomy and was celebrating her freedom. As for STD's, she'd brought plenty of condoms along and handed them out to the guys she didn't know well enough.

Hot,hot,hot. You sure know how to write. You got me worked up. Keep up the great work. You are my favorite.

"I hoped his Boss would not recognize me?" Well, I for one remember every hot little slut that I ever fucked. He probably started getting hard as soon as he saw Candy. I just love this one! 5 stars for sure.

I'd love for the author to detail "the rest of the night was a blur"! How about it?

5.0 = 💯% (☆☆☆☆☆),👍👍!

I loved that Candy didn't want to go to the wedding. Gary insisted, knowing he was "outing her" to his boss and buddies. Then the invite to the Poker game. What a great wrap up! The poker game story is right there to be written. How about it Imstillfun?

Awesome story. That's all I can put down in words at the moment.

This story is way under scored in my book. Super hot and gets 5 stars easy from me. This one ought to have a red H for sure. Come on guys, score this higher!

That story is one hot fantasy I’d love to think might become reality one day!

I don’t understand the vitriol in some of the negative comments; it’s a story, in the loving wives category, which will have cheating, cuckhold, and unsafe sex. The surprise is how people act surprised at the content. As to the story itself, the writing and pacing was average or slightly above. I enjoyed the competitive/pressure that built naturally as she stripped, to go further in order to keep the attention away from the porn. I but what followed lacked depth or engagement, and read more like a summary of a basic porn scene.

That's my comment from 10 days ago below. To Continue on, I think it's realistic in a bachelor party setting in a private home if the hot stripper sucked one cock, I think it's VERY possible for her to get gangbanged. The guys are semi horny from the porn and her show, they're uninhibited from the alcohol. There's the team camaraderie of hanging with your buddies in a testosterone laced setting. Dream come true for the guys, and for a sexxy slut that likes multiple men it could be her dream come true as well. I gave this 5 stars and think it should be rated higher than it is.

The sex in this one is really hot. I love that she feels embarrassed and steps up her game. The part where the guys are chanting "suck it, suck it" is very realistic for a group event with guys that are drinking. It would be cool if you wrote a sequel of her going to the Poker game. They'd poke her.

Brilliant story

I love doing strip shows. I sometimes go further if the money is right

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Just loved it. Want to hear about the poker game.

Anna

Awesome! Loved it. Bring on more!

I wanted to hear about the poker game as well l wanted Gary to get envolved

I don't know about these guys paying attention to the porn in the background instead of the live woman undressing in front of them, that just ain't the way my momma raised me! I'd say they don't deserve what she gave them, but then, it wasn't really about them. It was about her getting what she wanted...

Love it!

Erotic, yes. A good story, hardly.

Why didn’t she turn off the tv?

Really good .i loved it must be a part 2

Don't care for the humiliation aspect. It dropped my score from a 5 to a 1

However, despite that it was erotic

Bring Back Candy for the poker game. Gary would love it!

I love this classic from Imstillfun. A great read and always gets me hard AF.

Not what I find exciting, but it was well written.

Great story. That's one thing I've never been a part of. Came close once but I chickened out. I think I was in my early to mid 20's. Oh well. What story was quite erotic. Another great job. Keep up the great work.

I loved her progression in this story. The author brings the female characters participation in well. At first she is just wanting to be a people pleaser, wanting to do a good job, keep their attention. As she succeeds in doing that she discovers how the eyes and hands on her completely turn her on. The progression to the gangbang is great and as always the sex is sizzling with this author. I think the card game would be a wonderful next step for this very sexxxy slut.

Don't care for the humiliation aspect. It dropped my score from a 5 to a 1

Great story. As others have said only trues sluts can fully appreciate it.

Wonderful story that I hope is based on truth.

a kind of story only another Slut can really appreciate. if you need help at the next party you know where I am.

Very good story!

BeautiFUCKING

A juvenile fantasy. Meh.

Bill S.

Oh yeah, super hot story, I loved it!!

Ugh!

poof! and just like that,,life changed for gary and his slut wife,,love it,,tried to get my bride to play while we were still young enough to enjoy it, but she would have no part of it,,,,,so i went and played on my own,,do not regret it for one minute, but she didnt stay,,too bad for her,,i met some wonderful loving people.

Again a gross story about a cheating lying whore.

Those of you who find this hot? Who think the idea of having your wife act a slut for your coworkers? Getting sloppy 7ths? Even as fantasies? Seek help. You need it.

The only way a story like this ends? Is in tragedy. The wife ends up a tramp fucking every swinging dick she comes across because hubby doesn't care. And she loses every bit of respect for him and herself.

And the best they can hope for is divorce. The worst and most likely outcomes? Disease. Aids. Or someone gets criminally angry and guns or knives get involved.

All because some stupid hypocritical slut wants a big dick.

Super awesome story.

What a two-faced, hypocritical, lying, cheating cunt! Oh, her BF can't have any kind of sexual stimulus, but she can let herself get gangbanged, ass-fucked and bukkaked - and that's alright in her pea-brain, self-entitled whoring mind!

When she said "ok" to attending the poker party, I would have slapped her so hard she'd have to wait until next weekend to find her eyelashes back from the future! I would have kicked boss in the balls and told him I quit. Then, just walk away from human-pigs. Don't need that kind of bullshit aggravation.

Nicely done. I liked how shy and insecure Candy was when she first started stripping. 5 stars from me.

The card game in the back of a liquor store....

Lick er in the front

Poke er in the rear

Interesting story I wonder if it is true...or not! These type of events are fetish stories, personally never experienced anything like this but even as a warm blooded male the thought of someone or a group of guys fucking my wife years ago would have been revolting!

But these days it turns me on, I would certainly enjoy the experience of watching and obviously joining in of course probably at the end last one in!

Sloppy 7th or whatever, ready lubed, there is something about a gangbang that excites men, and their hubby often comes into the equation.

Well, did Gary and her get married or were they already married. I guess it did not matter as long as she got all the cock that she could take and Gary was good with it. I wonder if Gary kept a log of how many cocks she had since then. The next one was the poker game, then after that, who knows how many. I hope that they kept count and he kept her going with the morning after pill to help her not get pregnant. At least once a week STD testing too. Would have liked to have several chapters with her and even some with Gary staying home while she went out by herself. Driving men insane when they can't go with their slut and only get leftovers when she comes home.

Poker game! Long overdue.... Poke HER game, that is... Write the sequel! We all want it, you laid the groundwork.... Poke her!

I love your cuckold stories. My girlfriend and I get off on this fantasy all the time. Now she's said she will do it for real though.

I absolutely LOVED it. The build up, her inner insecurities about being hot enough. Her crossing the line because she wanted to win vs the porn on tv. Her cumming when she sees her man hard from watching her. I think the Poker game should be your next story. 5 stars!

Love this story. Read it a couple times.

I hope there’s a sequel at the poker game.

The story was great. The build up was a little long winded for me, but that's my issue. I gave ya 5*. I, like many others would have liked it if A. Gary would have gone last and really treated her like a cheap whore. Calling her names and stuff. And B. Since Gary introduced them at the wedding, he had to know this was a very loud way to basically say to his boss, 'remember that slut you had total control over at the bachelor party, actually she's my wife and here she is probably only thinking about your big cock right now'. So it stands to reason Gary is a cuck and wants to give his wife to Big Cock. Nothing wrong with that, run with it. Instead of inviting her to the poker game he shoulda told her to be there, just like he told her what to do at the party. But I digress that's just how well I enjoyed yer story. I became invested in it to the point I gave it real thought.

Oh and I tried 4 or 5 times to make a username so I wouldn't be anonymous but every time it said there was a problem with either the password or username so you can call me Mickey.

And to the commenters who either want to bitch about arbitrary star ratings or have a self loathing after going to the trouble of looking up erotic/sex stories, swiping thru and finding one in a category they "find repulsive" just to spew hate for the woman, man, women, men, animal, and or animals that might be in said story or worse yet the author of those stories...Shuuuuutuuup. Yer own insecurities are showing and the rest of us find that morally reprehensible.

Again good story, I see it's been quite awhile since ya wrote it I hope to run across pt2 the poker game. Keep up the good work!

Personally, I could not be a husband to a hotwife... too many built-in insecurities. BUT, I'd sure love to have best friend who has a hotwife! lol

Good as a fantasy but it is nothing more than that. Nice buildup with female feeling inadequate, in fact most female do feel that way - inadequate and this is why they are faithful. I guess this goes with males as well.

i would love to help you wright the next installment.

LEe

This is my kind of constant fantasy. I know for a fact that my fiance would end up doing this with a lot of reluctance at first, but as soon as she saw the first hard cock come out she would be pleasing every single one of them. She would take every load inside her she could get, but she's a slut and loves to be called just that.

I'd love to hear any true stories of this happening, or anything else anyone wants to share.

Fat.dick.thick123@gmail.com if anyone wants to share.

un realistic in the extreme,,but its a porn story site so anything goes. well written well paced..very erotic.

It was an easy read and lots of fun. My wife went to a party like that once, there were several male stripers and she got to do one of them in a back bedroom. I found out by watching some of it on her laptop.

I loved it! The "average" girl wouldn't very likely put herself in this position, but it is understandable how once in it, (if... she's a people pleaser) she could allow things to escalate. It is totally palpable that once she starts sucking one guys cock, the other guys would throw all reserves to the wind (I AM after all, a guy! LOL) and screw the daylights out fo her. I think this tale deserves continuation. Poker game?

This is a good, easy to read, story. Of course the story was over the top and unreal, but this is a porn site devoted to fantasy - so read and enjoy! [or stop reading when it offends you] The most unreal part was that a woman so opposed to Bachelor Parties, because she disliked the idea of strippers and possible sexual activity between the future groom and stripper, would volunteer to be the stripper at a party.

Once she was at the party, events seemed to flow in an understandable way as the situation got out of her control. Naturally the fantasy was that she was a slut for big cocks, but didn't know it until opportunity knocked. Instantly, she became a complete insatiable slut!

At the party, she fucked and sucked all the men till they were drained and unable to recover. At that point it would have fulfilled the cuckold fetish for her husband to fuck her for sloppy tenths (or maybe twentieths haha).

The end of the story was a letdown. Early in the story, it is declared that Gary (with his wife) would be the only person from the workplace to attend the wedding; but then "Big Cock" is there and recognizes her. The recognition and invitation to the poker game was okay but bland, in spite of the insinuation of more sex. A more interesting ending would have Big Cock not recognize her due to the setting, her different attire, makeup, hair, etc., but have him be impressed and make a chuckling comment to Gary that "she looks better than the stripper and the stripper was hot". Introduce Gary's wife to Big Cock's wife for laughs. Perhaps have Big Cock ask Gary to contact the "stripper" asking her to meet Big Cock for a night of one on one, for her stripper fee of course. That would continue letting Gary be a cuckold, his wife be a slut for the huge dick, while making the boss a buffoon. Plus it provides a plot for a sequel. :-)

Wanted to give 5 stars, but only gave one. This is the kind of masochistic psychosexual pain that grabs and twists my balls until I scream and cum, as I imagine my own wife doing this. I hate it with every fiber of my moral, intellectual being - but my sexual depravity gets me hard enough to break concrete. The remorse and shame that follows is what eventually controls the final feelings and impacts my vote.

Sorry.

And thanks.

Good , hot story.Went to a party like this,5 years ago, made the mistake in taking the wife

She became the the party stripper, I just watched as she took in 5 different cocks

If it's so depressing, why the fuck are you still here? Move on cucky, nobody gives a shit about you.

Are you doing a continuation? Enjoyed it, was slow then took off

Did you know that NTR Games on Patreon is making money from your writing. A Favor for a Friend VN is almost your story word for word but with visuals.

This was a fun read. It starts out slow with a shy stripper planning to strip down to pasties and a thong. "Big Cock" takes charge and the shy stripper becomes a wanton fuck pig. A very hot story, thanks for sharing.

I might let myself be coerced into doing something like this but, I am pretty sure I would call a halt to it before it went too far, some teasing and nudity can be fun but I cant let all that happen. Hot story though

'Nuff said...

This is obviously a story that can run and run. And so it must!

I love your writing, please please please, never stop!