All Comments on 'Back and Forward'

Great writing and an even better story. Please extend the story!

Quite original. Just one question: Why is the ever obedient Edward a math geek? Isn't that one cliché too many? Nevertheless you write well and I applaud your imagination. Five stars from me. -- JB Edwards

This story is great. Well told and written. Cliches are cliches for a reason. They reflect real life.

Made me cum hard.

Very Good!

I hope you plan to continue. It was unsatisfying with little action Edward had with them. I expected Jacko to fuck Edward.

We need Babs and Edward in a 69 with Jacko banging Edwards butt. Then finish in Babs butt and Edward licking it out.

The threesome thing is not my cup of tea, but your writing style is hot as hell. Keep it up please!