by Jizzmeister
Well, Jizzy, your story lived up to your nom de plume!: Jizzmeister indeed! Lots of cum from Rob and drenching amounts of wetness and cum from Mum. It left me wanting more! More sex in the morning and where oh where do they take it from here?! Bonerific! Thanks for writing!
Another 9 inches story where the mother easily sucks and fucks her son. That aside it was okay. 3 stars.
Thanks so much for providing humor in unexpected places, such as: "Rob proceeded to veraciously tongue fuck his mother." Well, it's good they were not lying.
Pretty well written but a slut Mom is not very erotic, I mean she will fuck anybody, right? "Its okay though because for you I'm a complete fucking whore!"
Serendipity happens all the time between mother and son. Their courage to let nature take it's course is inspiring.
The pretense of the story was good. Could've used some serious editing....lots of grammatical stuff going on here that made it difficult to read. I started becoming more focused on how it was written rather than what you wrote.
She should have dared him more to cum inside her…making it unclear whether it’s “safe” or not…idea of not knowing if it’s safe is so hot as you just throw caution to the wind and pump and pump…mommy in charge…
Good start ,maybe next time he visit she should have a big belly. That surely will be a big surprise for him!
Loved it nothing like jumping right into the sex and why did she want him to cum so much inside of her ? Is she trying to have his baby ? You need to continue with this !!!!!!!!!!!! 5 stars
I give it 5 stars for sheer audacity and ridiculousness. Straight to the good parts is sometimes all I want. Jizzmeister, find an editor/proofreader and continue your journey. This story is a good enough start for a great series that gives you the freedom to explore your wildest fantasies and improve your skills. Ignore negative and gutless “anonymous” comments.
When a Mother and her son is fucking, this is so great and beautiful and true love.
just reread this, having just read it 7 days ago, according to my first comment! one of the commenters mentioned it sucked that it was only his step-mom. Huh?? i read the tags at the beginning this time before reading and saw the step-mom tags as well, but there is absolutely ZERO mention of her being his stepmom in the story. So which is it?! I'm sticking with her being his birth mother, cuz every bit of language between the two screams 'mum', and not the other far less exciting option. Is there a stepmom to come in some future installment of this story?! will there even be more to this, as i see it, already fairly tidily wrapped up story? Inquiring minds want to know!
Bare armpits are OK, good. But a mom pussy; it needs to always be monster hairy. A (4) rating that would be an easy and a firm 5 rating for an abundant monster bush of pubic hair! Nest time make her hairy like all moms and mother in laws should be.
Pretty hot. She just needs to get knocked up now and lock her man down! I love how slutty she is with him and the dirty talk is good (aside from the constant "mommy", which just sounds a bit weird - use "mom" instead).
Loved it and one comment said step-mom but he said in one line the cunt I came out of so she's his mother. You need to continue and see were this goes gave it 5 stars