All Comments on 'Back In School'

please continue this story with many more stories

Can't wait for more

i love the story, please write the next chapter.

Please write more on this story. I can hardly wait to read what Winston has in store for Susie.

She described herself as the 'lady of the estate' and seems to act as if she's sure of herself. I can't see a woman getting wet and blushing at her ex-butler/sleasebag winking at her and such. It seems unrealistic.

Ok. There is something I don't understand. If all the girls are adult then he has no authority to hold them against their will. And if he is breaking the law the last thing he would need is for the police to come sniffing around his school in search of the missing executive who was last seen going to his school.

An excellent story, well written, and executed. However please write a second piece starting where she gets out of the shower. The last four paragraphs shows a summary of an fantastic story.

Although I write from an opposite perspective, I found this intriguing and well worthy of 5*. It is obviously ripe for a sequel. Would love to see more of this genre.

completely unbelievable... not impressed

Brilliant I second chapter is needed

Loved the story, very interesting how the tables have turned on young Suzie. Can't wait to see her lose more control to Winston

Great story wish there was more of it

Looks like this was your first story, great setting, maybe not fleshed out well or realistic and I like your newer works better but a fun quick read.

I believe the writer should have explained why the heiress trusted Winston, there having been bad blood between them. While the lack of a good explanation for warming up to Winston makes the story implausible, the author delivers an important point in response to the question: Do you really think you could make me look like a schoolgirl, Winston?"

Stripped naked, a pricey designer business suit and Gucci shoes placed in safekeeping, jewelry taken away, makeup and perfume scrubbed off that makeup and perfume,and given a proper school uniform, the heiress would be no different from the girls detained in the school. Externals create the identity,

great build up in story

I really wish this story was longer.

Too bad it’s not longer.

A haughty woman not thinking that an ex-servant could get the better of her, or would dare try, is brought down. A good premise, a marvelous story, gary

Storyteller gives an excellent answer to the question: why the heiress placed herself in a vulnerable position. The answer is a familiar theme in literature:hubris. This question bobbs up in the HCI tales by many of the writers who have branched off Joe Doe's Sandy Foot Girl series.

maybe A sequel Where she gets her revenged on Winston

or Prequel where she relives past times @ School