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by sarah_siddons

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FiveWolvesFiveWolvesover 10 years ago
good ideas; needs an editor

Hot at points, but the writing problems were really distracting. You switch between past tense and present tense, which slows down the reader because they have to figure out what's going on. Literotica has a volunteer editor program; it could make your stories go from ok to really good.

EnglishvoyeurEnglishvoyeurover 10 years ago
Beautiful

Thank you Sarah, that was a glorious read. Very sexy and in the moment. Proper erotica!

I look forward to more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sarah you're BRILL!!!!!!!!

Just discovered this site and I love this story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. Everybody is right...truly talented author.

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