All Comments on 'Back to School'

Cracking story, nicely written and good character development, I wish it had been longer is all.

A lovely story. Thank you.

First rate, well-developed characters. Looking forward to checking out your other work.

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Good writing. I am not a fan of "Ordering around" and Anal. So only three stars instead of five.

Justin will obviously be happy with an obedient Kelly, but we need to know that Kelly has inner satisfaction with the situation, otherwise this is not a tale with a happy outcome. A description of Kelly's acceptance and satisfaction with their relationship will be confirmation of a probable successful lifetime partnership and this feeling of Kelly should be the end of the tale.