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Click here"No." Watching the single tear trickle slowly down her cheek, he felt rather as though his own heart might break. He closed his eyes briefly, wishing beyond reason that it'd had never come to this, that he could somehow turn back time, that by some miracle, he wouldn't have to say the words. But no miracle appeared to be forthcoming.
"Charlie wasn't your father," he said at last, forcing himself to meet her gaze. "He was mine."
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Lily
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Bombshell! What timing.
There is a difference between genders telling a tale.
Men seem to like straight narratives;
"just the facts, ma'am...".
"Get the frigging point, man!"
Women are:
"Girl, I want all the juicy details...".
" ...So, then how did you feel?"
I have never been able to give these chapters more than a 3 ⭐ rating. Primarily because Matt has been a womanizing ass in each one. He has only lived for the moment and abused her naivety. Someone needs to show up and beat his ass and leave him lying in the dirt.
….. and this is sort of a whopper. Great story.
I don't understand why you (the author) does not address that a major part of Melissa's poor body image is from being made fun of almost daily for a whole summer about her appearance by the boy she loved and his best friend? Particularly at an age when body image is shaped so definitively.
Remember Charlie was the husband of Suzie who was Melissa's mother's sister (in other words her blood related aunt). He said Suzie didn't know about it so obviously Matt isn't her child as well. That makes Matt the offspring of Charlie and Charlie's sister-in-law Ruth, who are both not blood related to Melissa. Now if Charlie had been Melissa's father instead then yes they would have been first cousin's (or half-siblings if Charlie had sired both Matt and Melissa). So don't worry the author did not make a mistake by not putting this story under the incest category of Literotica.
oh my god.... that was so intense! didn't even see it coming! love your writing!