All Comments on 'Backseat Revelations'

Needed some editing, a bunch of misspellings, but a good story and I'd like to see future stories about this couple.

Well written and paced. Keep writing.

I loved the line 'tight teen twat!' There are a couple more tight places for Jackson to explore!

Loved fill with cuteness

Clean up the POV issues and those few typos and it's a 5

It's difficult to hide the smile on your face after you've had sex with your best fuck buddy. The glow gives you away.

Great story. Good luck in the contest.

I love it, those "it just kinda happened" scenarios. All bundled up in a cramped space only makes it hotter.

I'm going to enjoy reading the rest of your stories.

Nice first time story. Enjoyed the set up and the sex.

LOL

I wonder who started the myth about taking all your clothes off to keep warm. I suppose if it leads to sex it might work, but generally speaking you'd lose more heat.

Taking wet clothes off, yes, and taking clothes off to quickly share heat from a warm person to someone who's hypothermic also makes sense, but otherwise it sounds like an excuse to snuggle naked together.

Great story. I imagined being in that situation with my slightly older sister. The pragmatic sense of keeping close and the necessity of maintaining heat through being naked together. The accidental but maybe somewhat inevitable arousal and then the ultimate intimacy of fucking and cumming inside her. Thank you for posting.

Nice story.

Stretches the imagination a bit, but not badly.

Bill S.

Damn. That was pretty hot!