All Comments on 'Backsliding Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Outstanding character development

Although his change was abrupt it was not jarring (storyline made it readily believable) but the real gem is the wife: her character is changing slowly but surely and author is doing a bang-up job bringing her and the story along, keep it going.

HarddaysknightHarddaysknightabout 12 years ago
This is a really nice story so far!

You are doing a great job bringing the wife along. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Backsliding

Really enjoyed. A good story without having to give every minute' detail of the sex. We know those and our imagination works ,in my opinion, better than explicate renditions of sex.

Keep up the excellent writing.

chytownchytownabout 12 years ago
Thanks

For sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Good job ...

Just the right amount of everything.

adgeonadgeonabout 12 years ago
Great series

I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

BTTapBTTapabout 12 years ago
Great

Great tale. Sexy stories in this series. Each one builds towards....something.

The writing is both clean and clever and the dialogue seems true.

I will continue to follow the loving couple on their journey.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
great

And you are a great writer, re the explaining of feelings of human emotion

dbroseleydbroseleyabout 12 years ago

This is a great story and now will have to wait for the next chapter to it. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

These story is great...I can't for the next part..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This story is teasingly hot.

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