by bzzzman
Although his change was abrupt it was not jarring (storyline made it readily believable) but the real gem is the wife: her character is changing slowly but surely and author is doing a bang-up job bringing her and the story along, keep it going.
You are doing a great job bringing the wife along. Well done.
Really enjoyed. A good story without having to give every minute' detail of the sex. We know those and our imagination works ,in my opinion, better than explicate renditions of sex.
Keep up the excellent writing.
Great tale. Sexy stories in this series. Each one builds towards....something.
The writing is both clean and clever and the dialogue seems true.
I will continue to follow the loving couple on their journey.
And you are a great writer, re the explaining of feelings of human emotion
This is a great story and now will have to wait for the next chapter to it. Keep up the good work.