All Comments on 'Bad Bad Luck'

by Dirtynerdychick47

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n2anal78n2anal78about 3 years ago

Very well written - like you can see and feel her 'plight'

sport404sport404over 1 year ago

I like your stories but this one I felt was a bit to predictable and short. I liked how you developed your main character, I got a good feel of who she is. I would have liked you to have done more with your neighbor, work place, boss and loss control man. You started to with each but then moved on quickly. This is only my take on it. Please keep writing, I do enjoy your work I just want more from you.

WishnStarWishnStar9 months ago

Another very well done little tale of life that all of us have gone through during the luckiest days of our life. Very well done and interesting little story I have to admit my friend. You have a very intelligent way of writing things that just tease us in wonderful ways. Take care and have a fantastic week my friend.

WishnStar

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