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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
he should have got what she got

Good story, should have taken his ass rough too

ToughSailorToughSailor5 months ago

Damn! A real Sam Peckinpah story. Still don't know how Rick managed to get aroused after the hard beating he took. Literary license I guess . . . .

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I write very amateurish fantasy for my own amusement and hopefully for others. I am strictly a two-fingered typist, so stories take hours to complete and sometimes finish due to cramping, resulting in careless editing and sudden stops. I attempt to present views from bo...