All Comments on 'Bad Boy Road Trip Ch. 03'

You took more care in describing the Ranch’s Brand than you did the characters. Are any of them married? How tall are they?

I get that you enjoy writing about ass-fucking. I get that this is FANTASY. But having Jake go from being deep in one character’s ass to having his cock immediately sucked by another (without washing) is seriously stomach churning. Gross. Not sexy. Inject a TINY bit of reality here. Going straight from ass to mouth or ass to pussy without washing is beyond nasty. It’s dopey.

Having Jake’s ass reamed was an interesting surprise. But consent is nice too.

Don’t be scared to slow things down a tiny bit. Just a little more character. A tiny bit more realism and consent.