All Comments on 'Bad Break, Good Break'

by ColonelB

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Dr beulahthemick; Now that's what I call a hot, sexy story, everyone is treated equally and enjoy themselves and each other, perfect.

buzzsawlennybuzzsawlennyalmost 2 years ago

Love it...no cheating bullshit...equality....love

6King6Kingalmost 2 years ago

NICE! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
Very Hot and Exciting

Wow that was a great 5 star story with fun characters and wonderful storytelling. Thanks for writing and publishing. Would love to have a few more chapters of the this rewarding relationship these three have. Lots of fun still to be had. Cheers

maxx308maxx308almost 2 years ago

A very hot and sexy story, thank you so very much for sharing.

RayRam53RayRam53almost 2 years ago

This was a great story, but you really needed someone to proofread it. I would have given it 5 stars but. I convert all stories to audio books to save on my eyes and I am a night owl spending my nights in the dark. I thought it was well done but every few sentences there were grammar mistakes. I was ready to scream a few times, LOL, What the eye does not catch the ear does. Just a hint for the next time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

We were going really well, until you put her previous nurse I'm comparison to the new one. Really? Having to point out she was black and 200kg? You could have said the woman just didn't strike his fancy, or he was in too much pain to be horny. Idiot.

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