by ColonelB
Dr beulahthemick; Now that's what I call a hot, sexy story, everyone is treated equally and enjoy themselves and each other, perfect.
Wow that was a great 5 star story with fun characters and wonderful storytelling. Thanks for writing and publishing. Would love to have a few more chapters of the this rewarding relationship these three have. Lots of fun still to be had. Cheers
This was a great story, but you really needed someone to proofread it. I would have given it 5 stars but. I convert all stories to audio books to save on my eyes and I am a night owl spending my nights in the dark. I thought it was well done but every few sentences there were grammar mistakes. I was ready to scream a few times, LOL, What the eye does not catch the ear does. Just a hint for the next time.
We were going really well, until you put her previous nurse I'm comparison to the new one. Really? Having to point out she was black and 200kg? You could have said the woman just didn't strike his fancy, or he was in too much pain to be horny. Idiot.