by regularguy13
I too had a bitch of a sister. One night she came home drunk and passed out. I had the chance to make her pay, but only peeked. One of my bigger regrets not doing more.
It kinda messed with me how bad they got it and no revenge. Like you imagine a regular rape story, but then added his confession and threw in a happy couple. Also it was a bit confusing if they were all sisters or if Cassie was a friend. Anyway try making them flow together a bit smoother if you do more rape+love
I didn't buy Michael's sudden reformation. He had his drunken party story, and the girls bought it. Why would he then confess? I know this is fantasy, but ...
Ok, thiis is a novel. But No assistance is also a crime. If the girls were to call the cops, ..
Barely a "happy ending." This was a poor example of men taking advantage of women, particularly drunk women. If this rings your chimes as a reader, you should seriously reconsider your attitude.