All Comments on 'Bad Day'

Very nice we are looking forward to what comes next

One word: HOT! Well written and paced. I am looking forward to reading the next installment. Soon, I hope.

I hope she does get pregnant

Looking forward to more of this!

Very sexy writing and it is great to find someone who cares for you. Hope Mom does not Get Pregnant safe it for the Right Place an time. You need a few more hot Times or a Threesome.

Well, that's a Hot little Mom and Son story. I do hope that Mom is smart enough not to get knocked up. Also hope She's setting up some serious revenge on his cheating wife. Can't wait for more!

1st I got to tell you you need an editor badly!! Apparently you're not good at proofreading your own work.

2nd I get the feeling from how you choose your words and sentence structure English is not your primary language. Though you are better than most at you're writing as far as grammar goes it is evident to someone who appreciates much better writing.

I don't care what Bruce said, I still enjoyed it and can't wait for part 2

Keep going, good so far looking forward to Chapter 2

Nice job. 5 stars so far. I look forward to Part 2. Debbie seems like a whore that you need to divorce and perhaps get together permanently. She seems to be wonderful. You two may be having a child on the way. As time goes by, the age difference may become a problem. It all depends on how you two handle it

I really enjoyed Pt 1 of your story and look forward to the follow up. Lets hope there will be some major BTB

If you promise ch 2 please do it

Why did he (you) allow the Panhead to be taken? That sucked!

Okay, so he didn't explode or break down upon finding his wife with her lover, the marriage obviously was a farce anyhow. But why did he let her take his belongings, including a valuable bike? Nice read, glad you posted it. What a hot and comforting mother.

Liked it..Hope there is a problem 2.

What ever happened to part 2 of this story ???????

I hope you get around to finishing it PLEASE.

Please let me know if you are going to.

(rjb49@bellsouth.net)

Good start (save the Harley) to...\

11/10!!!!!

Like the story a lot. AAAAAA++++++. Next chapter please.

You need to get off your ass and finish this story. You can not leave us readers in limbo.

Really enjoyed it but would love to see the next part.

Every one at Literotica writes like the took no English orEnglish Lit classes. Some of the best Authors have told me they use the dot dot dots for a pause and I answer them by telling them that aren't they supposed to write well enough that the reader is supposed to use his imagination created by the Author? Most of you read a few stories here and say, "Hell, I can write as good as that" and off you go after you've picked up the bad habits picked up at Literotica! I did like the story though after editing out the dot dot dots and loading into my Text Aloud Text Reader software and Listened to Jennifer read it to me! As I stated I liked the story enough for 5 BIG ASS FUCKING STARS!

Really stupid. Rushed beginning, no explanation for the drama. Stuff being put into a moving truck that makes no sense. And then just monotonous same old stuff Beyond that. Certainly not worth the time to write it, much less to read it.

as two above have said: why in the world did he let his belongings be taken by her??!! He acts like he's been cucked all along when he's only been lied to all along. Big difference. So why is he so shocked into not saying anything when she rolls right over him?! I'm not saying he needs to confront them, but give us a reason why he doesn't. And yeah, he needed to man up and didn't. Losing his job couldn't have been too devastating given his hidden bank account. Mom was way warm for his form from the get-go, which makes your romp ever so much fun, if not very challenging. Thanks, mom, for an enjoyable story. The nine-incher could have been revealed a whole lot earlier, with mommy oohing and aahing for all she's worth, but instead there's no description at all til they're way down the road. Pity

I hope that you are still on-line so that you read this and finish this story.

You left us with a BIG question mark.

Who is coming over??

What happened with his wife????

Did his Mother get pregnant???

PLEASE FINISH THIS GREAT STORY. THANK YOU.