by stuffscribbled
Wow. That was fantastic! I was drawn right in there the author did a fantastic job at drawing the reader in! Please continue to write more stories this was fantastic!
Your name is, "Fuck it"?
Amusing, but that's the way you wrote it. Give yourself a name, and her. It works better that way.
Oh. My.
Honestly? Exactly what I have been looking for.
Thank you.
Please keep writing.
I love that there's no dialogue and no names so it can be anyone. Loved it!
That was amazing for such a short story. You painted the scene beautifully and had little words and phrases that hinted at the rest. It was almost like an erotic haiku for capturing a moment and an emotion in time. Well done.
This is an absolute jewel! Really good male-viewpoint writers on this site are a rare-thing.