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MistressMissy08MistressMissy08almost 2 years ago

Wow. That was fantastic! I was drawn right in there the author did a fantastic job at drawing the reader in! Please continue to write more stories this was fantastic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Your name is, "Fuck it"?

Amusing, but that's the way you wrote it. Give yourself a name, and her. It works better that way.

ellen_devlinellen_devlinalmost 2 years ago

Oh. My.

Honestly? Exactly what I have been looking for.

Thank you.

Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Omg… I’m dizzy

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I love that there's no dialogue and no names so it can be anyone. Loved it!

shadrachtshadracht11 months ago

That was amazing for such a short story. You painted the scene beautifully and had little words and phrases that hinted at the rest. It was almost like an erotic haiku for capturing a moment and an emotion in time. Well done.

SimonBrookeSimonBrooke9 months ago

This is an absolute jewel! Really good male-viewpoint writers on this site are a rare-thing.

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Been a reader of Literotica for many years and finally started writing both because I enjoyed it and as a way of exploring fantasies beyond the reality and routine of normal life. I need to write more. I have ideas, just not the discipline. I'm slowly starting to explore what...

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