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Click here"Hey there, husband of mine! There's a gorgeous woman there beside you and she's getting lonely!"
It's true; I had been so mesmerized by Carolyn's seduction that I had all but forgotten Sally. It was like a dream, as I sought Sally's exquisite breasts and saw her rise before me, her splendid hourglass figure outlined against the brightness of the afternoon sky. I felt my hands on her ass, drawing her hips toward me, and my lips soon found her expectant clitoris. In short order she was bucking like one possessed, finally reaching a thunderous climax in my arms. All the while I could see Tom giving his ministrations to my wife, and having both women shudder in ecstasy was almost more than I could bear.
Momentarily, a gasping Sally had recovered and took my cock into her mouth. My arousal was such that she proceeded delicately, letting me hold back the orgasm that felt like an incipient explosion within me.
Carolyn rose and took me gently by the hand. We embraced and kissed, and she sat me down on the step. She then stepped to me, opened her legs and lowered herself onto my throbbing erection. In moments we were thrusting with frantic abandon while Tom positioned himself behind Sally and entered her doggy style. Hoarse gasps of passion were filling the air as two couples joined ever more intensely.
Carolyn came at least half a dozen times before it was my time. The dam broke; and I lost all sense of time and place as my cock spewed forth into my wife's lusty body. Wave after wave, spasm after spasm, consumed my eager body as she hungrily took it in; every delicious tingle, every expectation built by the gradual ignition of passion became fulfilled.
Minutes later we sat in the swirling water, spent, drained, satiated. Carolyn was resting her head on my chest as I admired her nude form, undraped and unashamed before our friends.
There were several repetitions of our passionate ecstasy that afternoon. Although Tom and I were each sucked to tumescence by each others' wives and returned the favor to them, we didn't go the whole way. Somehow we knew, without saying it, that it might be too much, too fast to take it there, and it could spoil everything. There would be plenty of time to explore such things in the future and learn just where our own joys and boundaries might be.
Carolyn and Sally continue to meet for morning coffee and chatter thereafter. Not all their conversations are devoted to sex.
Or so they claim...
- COMMENTS
tazz317over 12 years agoand now we are open and out side the norm. TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousabout 13 years agoToo short to be meaningful. Not enough time to develop characters or motive. I give it 3 .
toffyabout 19 years agoit's a great, fun story. no-one is hurt and there is some fun sex and a few laughs and new friends are made. what could be better?
Anonymousabout 19 years agoit's a great, fun story. no-one is hurt and there is some fun sex and a few laughs and new friends are made. what could be better?
Anonymousabout 19 years agoare one thing within a marital context - acccepting his wife's blowjob of the pool guy and encouraging her to go further without him is unrealistically perverted self cuckolding and very sick.
How depraved to have him sooth her own self disgust at cheating on him and thier marital contract - just humiliating to see a married (man?) approve of his spouses infidelity. It wasn't fair - shared or balanced in any way - only self serving to her and in his face yet he approved? - how sick are you author - how disgustingly against human convention is self cukolding by him - there are no hero's in this story - just fuck and suck in a most depraved depressing way.
And the lack of respect trickles to you author - are you to write for the sick numb pitiful jaded one's who need cuckoldings sorid vile errections to get off as nothing else will? They will support your cuckolding depravities in the short term but the vast majority will score and comment of your disrespect for males and marriage by negative responses. You see it isn't a morality thing - it's about human respect - you for us and in the void of it our lack of respect for you and your efforts.
Methinks your talent says you can do better in other themes where credibility and respect for you can result.
Please give it some thought - or not
Anonymousabout 19 years agoThis klown in Kalifornia has a nasty habit of criticizing stories if they don't contain the morality he feels is appropriate. He should grow up and realize this is an adult site with erotic stories. As for this story I liked it and thought it was well written. Another poster mentioned the dialogue was good and I agree. Don't let trolls get you down about what you write and how you decide to end the story.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI found the story to be well written. As for the story line, and as for the sex scenes, they were tame. Not disappointing, but tame. The author's use of dialog was good. Some more details from the wife about sucking the pool guy, for example, might have heated this tale up.
I don't think the author needs any tips from me. But anyway, when doing a rewrite, slow the scene down by inserting more dialog and detail. Like have the wife hesitate before she takes on the pool guy, have her describe something like the feel of the hard concrete on her knees, or highlight her new experience of being nude, outside, in front of strangers.
Just the same, I enjoyed the effort and thanks for the contribution.
Marilyn37MWFabout 19 years agoIs reading erotic stories--So holier than thou persons should not ever enter a site like LITEROTICA.
BYE...........
fakers51about 19 years agoSally has just introduced this husband and wife to group sex, where they take if there remains to be seen, unless the author wants to write chapter 2.
