by DanDraper
It's always nice to run across something unique and this idea is new to me. Well written and even believable. Thanks for the gift ;)
Great story. Usually the stories in this section are just mildly humorous, yet still fun to read. But this one had some great humor to it and I enjoyed it a lot. Keep up the good work.
Great story. I giggled or outright laughed through the whole thing. I kept thinking about the girls that I had kissed and was thankful that they kept coming back for more. Jessica used her conditioning technique correctly but a little too enthusiastically. You don’t want to harm your subject. I’m going to read some other stories by DanDraper.
@anonymous thank you. I thought it would be funny for her to slap him around as a punishment, but it did sound like she enjoyed doing that to him as well. lol.
Much better!
You made your characters real and made their actions flow smoothly.
Well done.
Bill S.
Hilarious. I especially enjoyed the comments that were made about how bad of a kisser he was, it was too funny. I'm glad he got a good teacher and she had to do whatever she had to to make him better. Slapping him around was probably the only way to make him learn.