by Smuttyandfun
This site is filled with stories written with poor grammar, and I have always read on to give writers the benefit of the doubt ... until now. This story is so poorly written that I couldn't make it past the fifth paragraph. The dangling modifiers alone make it impossible to read.
If there was a dangling modifier, or even a hundred, I missed them all. This was one of the best stories I've read in awhile. Hot, wet, sexy, horny, bad Kitty, I'd say.
But we were left hanging. What happens next? You've left us with a cliffhanger--we want more of this delightful story. Several chapters, right? Tell us they get married, so they can get it on every night. Loved it!
Some people need to put their red pencils down and just read the story. Loved it, and hoping for more!!! Terrific Read!
Can they do it in a shower or bath? I want to see them go on a trip with their newly wed parents and have their lust for each other boils during the trip. It happened before with my girlfriend and I. We went on a trip with her parents and we had to keep our hands to each other the whole time. We hooked up right after the trip ended and all of our repressed sexual urges exploded and it was insanely hot...just a suggestion...
Can’t wait to read the next chapter. How do their parents find out? Does the wedding turn out to be a double wedding?
But ... I need to read chapter six. You cannot leave us hanging!
Get them married already!!!
Now I've got to get busy and read the rest. Great writing, nice and hot too!!!
It may have started out “Bad Kitty”, but it turned into a purring, mated pair! Wonderful job! Please keep writing and I’ll keep reading!! ❤️🌹 Loved it!!
Hi, S&F, Great story setup! Their encounter was incredibly hot but the dinner party was a complete surprise and added depth and complication to what would have been just an incredibly hot encounter. I'll send you a PM with a few additional comments. Looking forward to Part 2!