by AllyBlue
What a great story! I loved the way you put it together and turned it on it's head with great emotion and fantastic sex. It was corny, it was funny, it was outrageously sexy. You got my 5!
I laughed my ass off. It was funny, fast-paced and uber sexy.
Thanks!
This more than deserved it's "E" as editor's choice! I loved the layers--on down from mock "Doctor's Office" to bad "Porno Film" to hot "Real Sex." Powerful, sexy, funny, charming.
this was boring and lifeless like a porn audition and a med exam which it was about. the crapper smell this time was the story and not the sodomy.
Imaginative, creative, and funny. Gay porn stars are interesting story characters, I've discovered. Fun to write and read about. Wrote a story featuring two gay porn stars here at Lit some time ago.
You caught the essential absurdity of pornography while also acknowledging that sometimes, just sometimes, real passion happens even in the most ridiculous, artificial situations. Good job.
OMG!! The best story ever. I was laughing my ass off and at the same time I was SO fucking turned on. Great job. I loved it!!!
it's so damn hard to find well-written and arousing erotica. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write more!
man!! its so great! i loved it!!! i h ope there is a continuation to this story!!!
How am I the first and only commenter?
Loved this.
So amazing.
Wish there was a continuation.
^_^
This is fucking amazing! My cock thinks so too! ;) the passion between Jim and Todd is what I long for
Never thought gay porn could be fun and hot at the same time. Shame you never wrote any more, but I suppose we can imagine them having a relationship by ourselves. As well as becoming porn stars together - hopefully with a better script writer :-)
I can't remember when I laughed this much ... LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!
So effing funny! Are you writing a sequel? Please consider it, because both Todd and Jim are sooo hot together - and Derek is hillarious.
I would love to hear from them again ! ^^
WOW, I want that!
I want to pass out from getting fucked so GOOOOOD!
I’m 57 an kind of fat, does that matter?
Crap!