All Comments on 'Badass Ch. 06'

Thank you so much for posting this chapter, i was getting very impatient. Anyway this was a great chapter, i really liked it. I hope you dont take very long in writing the next one, but dont rush it. To me it seems like you rushed when posting due to the errors i saw. But keep up the good work

Cant wait!

I had lost hope of you coming back

Whenever I come on to this site I dont go to the homepage I go to your submissions. I cried a little as I say the new chapter. Thank you

I think the title says it all....

If you need an editor, let me know.

love u! Love te new chapter .pliz dont leave us hangng 4 2 long pliz pliz

Love it totally love it. Been waiting and checking daily to see when you'd be coming back all the way from your last posting.

Just try to finish this story within a year because that last wait was really long. It's a good story... And another one on my waiting list. Thanks for the good read, it's nice writing

For more of badass and dont forget about titus and xander these are some of my favorite heros

This is the best story I have read on Literotica. I actually only read 4 chapters, but I came to Chapter 6 to write this comment. Please continue this series, it is great, and Zdenek is one badass character!

This is rocking and hair splitting.... man....

Definitely don't take this long... You've put this on a very strange and !Addictive! turn....

Fucking Epic!

please finush it, i'm realy enjoying this story.

This is a great story hope you keep up the good work. One thing though I've never before heard of or seen bitch black eyes :) Really just a few small mistakes through all the chapters I consider that great. It's very easy to look at stuff like that and not even see it because your mind knows what should be there and it's really close. Like I said hope you keep up the good work on this story and your others they have good starts as well.

okay! im still waiting for the next chapter and im not getting any younger . great story. please continue. its like anything addictive ,you need the next one.. thanks for sharing it.

hello, i have been reading your stories since u started on lit and been waiting for a long time for any update. i know it doesn't earn u any money and i appreciate the fact that u spend time writing these stories. i would like to know if u ever plan to continue any of your stories and when if u do. its been to long and i don't mind waiting but i just want to know if i should expect a update or not.

and i loved all your stories so far and would like u to continue your work if u can, if not, just post a msg that u cant continue them and i will understand.

thanks for the updates so far.

Nick.

wow man amizing chapter waiting for your next chapter....update fast

dude, you do know that you are posting these stories on lit 'erotica', right?

six chapters! six fucking chapters and no sex of any kind at all. granted your story is great and all that, and the first couple of chapters should set the stage and the characters and shit. but six chapters is way too long to go without sex. we need some sex in the next one, which btw when are you gonna publish? its been a while.

i especially like the wholr\e series not just #6 . but im still waiting for #7. is there anything i can do to speed things along? i think that it would be a terrible thing to not have more of this series. loved it. thank you for writting it

This is nothing. i once read a story that went 12 chapters before it got to SOME erotic scenes. so don't complain.

p.s. if urn curious as to the story its kita'thalla by bowoodstock. Not completely sure if its the correct author.

Ive been waiting on the update since this chapter actually came out. I dont know about everyone else but i actually like when a story builds up before any sex scenes or it can have no sex at all as long as its a good story. I just really want an update on any of your storys befause they are all interesting and there are very few storys on lit. that can stand alone without the sex and i think your storys count. So please update soon

#6 was great.. but dont put out a #7. if you do i think i would drop dead and it wouldnt do any good to write it. ill keep looking for it though, just in case

Your stories are fucking awesome. Please update soon. Honestly, I dont care about sex in this story. Just keep doing what your doing and I'll be fine.

Your stories are fucking awesome. Please update soon. Honestly, I dont care about sex in this story. Just keep doing what your doing and I'll be fine.

I think that this story is amazing! It is very interesting and I don't care if there is no sex either. PLEASE update VERY soon!

Plz continue with this epic story

Please continue this story

Just got onto these stories and I loved them. Please keep writing!

out of 100s of series i hav read this is the best . keep it up.

One of my favs

just read all six in 1 sitting hope u continue this series its awesome

4 some reason i was thinking baboon or hyena.. so much better than i thought.. again ur a great writer keep the suprises coming plz..

More please

I'm hoping that my title is incorrect. I think the story has at least another 50 or so chapters to go. if you would, just start with chapter 7, the other 43 will come.

it has the potential to be one of the best stories on this website. I'm talking about all the stories , not just sci-fi

Badass is just that, badass! Need more! Great job with the story. Look forward to more.

Just wanted you to know that I absolutely LOVE your story, I don't even care if there is no sex in this story I just want it to keep on coming!

Man, this sucked balls! This was like the worst battle scene ever. Think even you yourself can't top this utterly moronic crap. Seriously dude, I hope you don't post another chapter. Better yet stop writing, its just not your type of shit.

Funny how people don't have the guts to post there name when they drag a story down >>

please update n don't listen to idiots.you have a true writer in you.

Read this series a couple times wante more like it.

Please man, for all that is good in this world please keep writing:(!!!!

I dont know what every body else thinks and I dont really care, but I would appreciate it if you would finish this story ;).

You made an amazing world with great characters. They might be a bit predictable but I like them.

So pleasseee finish the story.

JW

I have read all of your series and I must say that they are some of the best stories I have ever read. I couldn't care less about how much longer it takes you to finish them but I honestly hope that you do finish them rather than disappearing off the face of the Earth like some other writers. Good luck with whatever is keeping you from writing and thank you for creating these fantastic stories.

don't leave us hanging. please finish it. thanks

This story is unbelievably awesome. Or should I say badass. Dude your stories are amazing!

Thank You for writing these stories!!!!

Where's the rest???????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!! This Is Totally Wicked!!!!!!!! Don't Leave Us HangIng!

Dude plz continue its AMAZING! How can u write like this. It's so good! I wish I could write like that but get someone to proof read for u. It has too many spelling mistakes. Anyway awesome plz continue!

Dude.....this is aaaawwwweeeessooooommmmeeees!!!!!!!!!

Hey, all of you who like this series, lets vote this up to a top level story! As high as we can get it! Maybe Dionysosk will get a email or something about it being a top story and remember to post the 7 chapter!

Signed,

SomeonWhoShouldgetaLitaccount

I like this series but it's not finished yet, right? I believe it is because you have not written more by now. So good but it's bad because it is NO finished.

Its all fluffed up, I prefer the understated badass than the OTT one, but each to their own