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by ChainedToAKeyboard

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jay1459jay145912 months ago

Fantastic story - loved it. More please!!!!!!!

JustplainjeffJustplainjeff12 months ago

And chapter two in coming when????

BetaDickSlaveBetaDickSlave12 months ago

Love it, but I'd rather read a part 2 to Humbled, if you can find the inspiration :))

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Good story, but a bit short. More chapters would be cool.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loved it! Where's part 2?

HreulfgarHreulfgar11 months ago

Very hot. Seemed to quit quite suddenly however.

Client8Client810 months ago

Great setup for a continuing romance, and there should be.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A great story, worthy of one of the foremost writers on this site! It is unexpected, after your Bayonetta series etc, to read an entirely 'safe, sane and consensual' story by you! A welcome surprise, in my opinion. The romance is very sweet, and the description of Theo almost drowning was very vivid. I agree with the others that the ending is abrupt, and that a part 2 would be great. Also, the style of beginning with a song is a nice habit

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