All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 07'

by Dark_Brother

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TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A very yummy chapter

Very well done, not everyone gets the alien part right, you did a great job! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
thoughtless action of the mc

considering he was a geek, it should have been a no brainer not to mess with aliens you dont understand. That Main character was disappointing in this chapter

tranzmanytranzmanyalmost 9 years ago
I don't have much to say except...

That was HILARIOUS!!! Enjoyable writing but also funny as hell.

InfiniteFoldingSpaceInfiniteFoldingSpaceover 10 years ago
I ended up playing on my computer, instead, until I went to bed.

But... exams?

BfreetorunBfreetorunover 10 years ago
Dark__Brother, your imagination is only exceeded by your sense of humor.

This section had a lot of funny things in it. Thank you for writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Different

Death by Snoo-Snoo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Talk about

Pon Farr

rabbit993rabbit993about 11 years ago
WOW

ET gets laid, I love it!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
alien sex

hot damn man that was awesome. I really felt bad when she said she was gonna die ><. I hope because of the gene she woke up in them for the powers she can have his babies xD.

cokavedwellercokavedwellerover 12 years ago
Beam Me Up Lela (D.B.)

I oh so want to attempt that. Don't know if I can hold out as long as our resident GEEK, but hell please give me the chance. That was seriously HOT can't wait to see if she comes up prego's and if so how both their DNA's mix. Along with the fact if she is, will she stay close to earth, and possibly assist with the defending of humanity. So many places you can take this, can't wait.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You have got to be the top author. I'd pay if your write a book

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wanna try it too...

with alien i mean...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wow

never thought alien sex would be hot ;)

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