All Comments on 'Baker and Jones Ch. 02'

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Brilliant, the relationship between Jones and Baker grows but now there is an added tension between them. The interplay between the two main characters is superb but whereas previously it could sometimes be described as banter now there is jeopardy. Bring on the next installment.

Omg so good and it was so nice to not have to wait! Thank you! I can’t wait for the next chapter :)

Nice followup to Chapter 1, you continue to build on the Cordelia and Annetta relationship in an intriguing way. There at the beginning in which Cordelia made Annette kneel I thought it was headed into a dom/sub scenario. However, you added a nice twist with Annette helping with the case. Cordelia’s role in playing Annette during the meeting with Lady Wilva was well conceived. I agree with Annette being angry at the end made sense but may have taken it to far with finger jabbing her finger at her boss. The ending has me wanting more. Thank you for writing/sharing.

The Jury is still out on whether I like this or not.

But I shall continue.

brilliant, absolutely BRILLIANT!

The temperament of the two characters are perfect. Like Sherlock Holmes a flawed genius and like Dr Watson a sharp mind but lacking in a certain 'something'.

It is only the 2nd chapter, but you have me hooked on these two.

I will read onwards, not only to see how they collide on other matters but just how powerful their lovemaking will be.