by MsAppropriately
Excellent, I began reading Part 3 hoping for some make up sex between Cordelia and Annette but the scene with Annette and Samantha filled the bill very nicely, pushed all the right buttons with me. The plot thickens with references and asides not yet clear and hopefully will become clearer as the story progresses. The reference to Annette being twice born intrigues me. I am so enjoying this tale, it is so well written and it is proving to be the result of a rich and powerful imagination. Needless to say five stars from me.
Another well written chapter, you’re taking your readers on a very mysterious journey. The Samantha-Annette-Cordelia relationship has heighten my interest.
Thank you so much for all the kind words! It really means so much to me to see this work be so well received. Next chapter is underway but will take a bit longer, so sit tight! I'm really excited about where the story will go next :)
Fully deserved 5 stars, with characters struggling to find their respective places in a patriarchal world
I’m new to the series, also intrigued by what sexual form is Annette, During her tryst with Samantha you veiling mention Annette “erection”. which leaves me she has both sexual organs. Will keep on reading you have hooked so far
I love this series. Perhaps to enlighten the honourable Whitewaterbum below, I can inform him that women have (at least) three sexual organs that are capable of becoming erect: two nipples and a clitoris. Maybe that is what the author meant? But of course, we mortals can sometimes only guess the intentions of divine writers ...
Perhaps a clue might be found in the understanding that Annette is, in our modern terms, a trans woman?
"Twice-born", hmmm? I think I like this in-story colloquialism for trans people 😁
Your skill in developing this story is first-rate. You show us that by sheer persistence and wordplay, you can bend someone to your will. I love it.