All Comments on 'Baker and Jones Ch. 05'

Nicely done! You took us right in at the crime scene, Cordelia’s handling of Annette’s discomfort was spot on. I love the banter between Annette and Cordelia in this chapter. Cordelia taking the umbrella and referencing it when Annette returns. You wrote a perfect scene as Annette attempts to enter Bembrook’s office, noticing the height difference on top of the car, struggling on the balcony. Then ending with Cordelia’s frustration with Annette. I read it as Cordelia knows how smart Annette is and what she can be capable of. Far more than being a collar. Only a little disappointed in Cordelia just taking the papers and not assisting more with the injured ankle, thought that could have played out better. I’ve ranted enough, Can’t wait for more.

I do love their repartee…

This was a really fun chapter to write, especially because of their banter. I absolutely adore their dynamics now that it's settled a bit, and I'm loving the chance to start really adding in a little tension between them with Cordelia's words at the ending. I keeping reading back to myself, "You're so close to being Annette that I can't bear it," and swooning.

I keep on coming back just for this story!!