by MsAppropriately
This series is great. Fun, clever and hot. I'm so happy for Cordelia and Annette.
Absolutely perfect! I was getting antsy from the anticipation of these two finally being together, and this moment was incredible. I can’t wait for the next one and I do hope there are more to follow. They still have a case to solve.
It's not a slow-burn unless you earnestly start wondering if it'll ever actually happen lol
And indeed, the game is still afoot!
Incredible culmination of twelve chapters of character development. The way you expose Cordelia and Annette's inner fears and desires is heartwarming. Your best chapter yet.
Probably one of the best chapters I have read in a long time. You are a very gifted author. I am intrigued by the inferred genitalia of the "twice born" in this story. At first I wondered if it was referring to a hermaphrodite but this chapter makes me feel that Annette's genitalia may actually be more male than female. Regardless, it is quite a twist on a plot for a story on lesbian love.