All Comments on 'Bakery Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
sooo close

I really like the set up of this story... but it feels too mechanical.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
good start

Terrible finish. Super rushed and kinda confusing. 1 star

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