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Then after she'd come a few more times, she looked up at me with pure lust in her eyes, and said, Now fuck me raw, babe! Come inside of me in a way that you blast into my should."

So I did. For the last time that night. I pounded like I felt one of those machined that pounded steel beams into the ground must have felt like. It didn't take long before I was coming, and hard. And as I was coming, so did she.

"YEEEEESSSS! Oh, BABE!"

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And this was the first night we were together. Most of them were not as wildly passionate as that first night, but the sweetness that developed over time more than made up for it.

Six months later, Diana and I were married before my family and hers, plus those very jealous friends that were with her that first night.

And we've just celebrated our third anniversary. This time, I managed to get that champagne bottle opened though!

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 months ago

Very enjoyable story!

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

This reminds me of my wife and myself's story. I had her pants off within the first five minutes of meeting her and now, after 51 years, we are still together without the bloom having worn off. Sometimes love at first sight is more than an old saying. Thanks for jogging some happy memories.

rjm2rjm22 months ago

Grammatical errors, made it feel very choppy, and hard to follow.

OvercriticalOvercritical2 months ago

I guess, sometimes you just get lucky. Here's to breaks for all of us. 3*

haltwhogoestherehaltwhogoesthere2 months ago

I wanted to like this, but had to read around typos and try to figure out what you really meant to say in several places.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Good premise, now add to this and put a full story to this and repost. Was waiting on the back story and it failed to materialise. So only a 3 redo and make it a 5. Like I said could be good but both characters need meat on the bones to be an excellent romance story.

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