All Comments on 'Bar Star Ch. 01'

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William smyth almost 12 years ago

A pleasant surprise

eroticism AND good writing.

This is good honest well wriltten pornography.

Something that is all too rare.

kitten2010 almost 12 years ago

Great start

I love this first chapter. You have the beginnings of some very interesting characters. I can't wait to see where you take them :)

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Just a regular guy that's gay and enjoys writing as a serious hobby. My stories will almost always be same-sex-oriented and tend to run more towards the romance and/or the first-time genres with the occasional foray into the drama or mystery areas. I do occasionally pop off a ...

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