All Comments on 'Bar Star Ch. 03'

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geemeedeegeemeedeealmost 12 years ago

Uh, as much as I enjoyed hearing of Kurt's exploits (especially the three-way), bring on the next chapter, please! Hitting "next" to find just one sentence was cruel. :0)

JKendallDaneJKendallDanealmost 12 years agoAuthor
A big OOPS! from the author...

Sorry about that, but it was completely unplanned. We can't control the way the site cuts and shifts paragraphs at times. Had I known it was going to post that way, I would have found nine words to lose elsewhere in this chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Please continue this series!

I would love to see more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
hurry

please hurry and tell more.......after a crap life he needs someone solid and david comes acroos as just the man.....ok...im a romantic at heart

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
I hope that this will be finished

It is really good so far

SilverSilhouetteSilverSilhouettealmost 10 years ago

why do i always crave more stories from this author like a skanky whore in a summer desert heat at high noon?!

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jim13164jim13164over 6 years ago
Unfinished

Only 4 stars total fell off cliff with no final landing

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