All Comments on 'Barb Becomes a Sex Toy Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
grammar comment

Heres a constructive comment: There are two forms of this three letter word. Normally apostrophe s ('s)signifies a possessive. In the case of this word that is not so. Note the examples below.

its (no apostrophe) meaning, belongs to it. ,"I saw its collar."

it's (with apostrophe) meaning, it is," It's cold outside."

Also be careful to use the proper form of these words in context:

There - that place " The box is over there."

Their - belongs to them "That is their box."

They're - they are. "They're looking for the box."

Your; yours - belongs to you."This is your box." "This box is yours."

you're - you are. "You're looking for your box."

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Really like...

the fast pace. Descriptions are tops too. More please. And thanks!

oldtwitoldtwitalmost 4 years ago

Makes a great change to keep up with such good work chapter after chapter

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I used to organize gangbangs for a married slut I knew, which she loved. Once when her husband was away for a whole week I arranged for her to be gangbanged every day while he was away. One time he called at night to see how she was doing and she answered sweetly while all the time two black guys took turns fucking her ass slowly while she told her husband how much she loved him- that was wild

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