All Comments on 'Barbara Pt. 02'

I like part 2 more than part 1. Barbara's motivation is slightly better explained here, although that's still a weak point of the plot.

It'd be even more interesting if it turns out that she's married (and lied about it when she said she wasn't). Barbara's conflict between her desire to get some sort of odd revenge for her daughter, guilt about cheating on her husband, and wanting to continue to fuck Mike could flesh out the plot nicely.

Anyway, the sex scenes are good. Looking forward to part 3.

This is a good story, I'm enjoying it. However, it would be much better if you kept the story going with just Mike telling it. Too much confusion with more than one story teller.

Great story. Looking forward to what happens next.

Really enjoyed the two parts. Can't wait for the next installment with mum and daughter, he's going to be worn out in no time. Well written and good characters. Like the bits from each character as the story progresses.

I hope you keep the story going, there are so many hot angles this can go. I agree with others, changing from Mike to Barbara is confusing. Leave it with Mikes point of view please. But it's a really good beginning and needs to keep going.

Both stories are amazing! If you don’t mind I would like to read more of what she wears in details and how it looks as she’s on all fours or undressed any detail to build up her sexiness.